/ Anime & Comics / NARUTO SI: A Burdened Soul (Elder Brother to Itachi SI)
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Reborn as the eldest son of Mikoto and Fugaku Uchiha, Izuna Uchiha will try to carve a future for himself and his family in a world filled with war, death, and treachery.
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I really this fanfic, I will talk about good parts first - mc is fairly powerful but not op, story focuses on other characters too which is good, you haven't weakened other characters like Minato, jiraya and fugaku which I really love. The overall pace is also good. I really look forward to mc character going forward, I hope he doesn't not stay this sullen forever. plus don't make it a harem please and don't make mc too op too soon otherwise the story will lose the seriousness in my opinion, so keep him fairly powerful going forward but not op. thanks really looking forward to read more.