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After discovering a long lost ancient forbidden master sealing technique created by a deceased clan leader and seal grandmaster of the Uzumaki clan, Jiraiya studies and tampers with it only for it to lead to unexpected results.
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Well, what can be said about this story. Clichéd, to the max. Here you will see deliberate limitation/revealing of powers under fictitious pretexts, starting with Danzo biting his balls, ending with equating the ninjas from the Naruto anime with their real world counterparts, which is fundamentally wrong and stupid. The author tries in logic but forgets that Heruzen has a very interesting ball, and Anbu occasionally but must watch out. Further, legacy, as they say here, is not the transfer of behavioral characteristics, but only skills and knowledge, and you have everything in a pile. Naruto is playing the retard, so bear with me. Those were the superficial cons. On the pluses, the interesting relationship between some of the characters. Original choices with the legacy (or rather who was taken for it), good update rate. Bottom line. I do not recommend to read, except for those who first decided to read the fanfic. And the rest safely pass myomo.
A nice bit of comedy in this Fanfic. Makes it feel closer to it's source canon involving pranks, quips and comebacks between adolescents. It starts a bit slow, but the story moves at a decent pace through cannon events without copying it, and adding the authors unique flair to the story to keep it interesting. Better than 90% of the MTL/poor grammar stories with high ratings out there.