Monarch of Darkness, Arsene

LV 3

Tartiris_

Story straight up makes no sense. Author clearly does not know what story passing and proper development is, and cannot properly narrate the story as their is a lack of explanation for the plot. Simply put only the author would truly understand the story, since whatever the story is only fully narrated in his head. Overall: Garbage tier writing/execution.

2yr 14

LV 4

Percent_Grader

He changes how the Mc normally acts when around love interest for example when she lives in his home temporarily she invites her friend to live with her he normally would have kicked her out but decides to do nothing. Said friend poisons Mc instead of killing her he just leaves her be with no hard feelings.

2yr 13

LV 4

Naavis

If you don't have a good level of english then pass on this novel. Plenty of the words used are wrongly writen, especially the use of were - where - we're or your - you're - yours, etc. The use of ',' is also trashy. Writing quality is deplorable. That aside, characters dont really mean much emotionally. You see them, they die. Thoigh I have never read a novel with a main character like this so it's kinda nice. Cultivation is a mess but I dont really care personally. Never really paid attention to it. To me this novel is just to kill time and read without pondering too deeply while at the same time training your english to find spelling mistakes. cheers

3yr 10

LV 14

Lecc

60 chapters in, I still don't understand even a speck of what is going on, no character makes sense, plotlines are convoluted and twisted, this whole "oh I'm a cannibal" thing never stops. I'm up for many things specially with evil MC, but one thing I just can't deal with is the pleasure of human meat. It's just absolutely upsetting. Oh and btw using a D20 dice although it sounds fun as a writer, it makes readers face too many confusing events.

3yr 9

LV 4

raj114

i usually read 50 chapter before continue or drop a novel but i drop this at C41........the plot are a mess...i dont understand where the story is going,this is chinese cultivation with western setting then hes kowtowing to his parents before leaving them....i dont understand the setting anymore...he act live evil n cruel MC then act like beta simp to the girl his mother force on him cuz he wont say no to his mother...then he leave the family home bringing the girl with him...she gonna ask for food n all then hes gonna think its so annoying but still do what she ask...hes leaving the family when theres lot of people targetting him even the king...i dont know if his guards that much stronger to protect him... I really like the concept of this novel with a EVIL CANNIBAL MC wreaking havoc in the world...i never read a novel with cannibal mc before so that kinde new but NOT gonna torture myself with this one....

2yr 7

LV 1

sayan_samanta

Review after reading 150 chapters: Don't read this novel, if you hate some disgusting stuff like cannibalism, child abuse, etc. MC is a cannibal & child abuser. Also, the storyline is very confusing and not worth reading & spending money on.

2yr 5

LV 1

Devilkr_17

Not a very bad not a very good concept. Mc was a cannibal in his previous life and also a serial killer so it is logical to expect that he should be cold blooded and have a collected personality but in the starting ch he is anything but that. How he easily forgave his mother for burning him alive for a year tho for his sake but still she hurt u bruh how can u easliy say its ok. And the darkness thing is quite weird but may be explained in the upcoming ch. He loses his cool with the fl and acts like an idiot. And lastly the thing i hate the most the cultivation world . The world is based on western fantasy as there are dukes kings marquis etc but then wth is there cultivation and spiritual energy or whatever. I jst hate the cultivation tag coz the majority of them are trash and weird. The power stages are so weird and cringy and the heaven and earth words which are literally in every chinese novel is so annoying.

2yr 5

LV 14

Dave_Zed

All in all, it was a very interesting read, a really chaotic evil mc. Until Yura came into the picture and it completely broke the immersion for me, every time time she appears he acts completely out of character without her adding any value at all. I understand it might change later, but after a few times I couldn’t keep up the interest

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2yr 4

LV 14

97Alex

Hmm, an interesting story with an interesting MC and who seems like the FL is also intriguing though weird af, alas the story isn't advanced enough to know more yet. I will say though that there are some grammatical errors that are quite a pain sometimes, though not something that detracts from the story. I've no problem with the update stability, but the pacing seems off, like sometimes it's very fast other times it's excruciatingly slow. Also, fair warning for new readers, I believe that the author doesn't explain much of the world, background and other details that may seem important, it is frustrating af, but he seems to go by the "Give small snippets of information in time" approach, rather than explaining things sooner. As I said this is frustrating though bearable, for me at least, idk about others. Anyway, this is a story with great potential which honestly deserves a chance, though it seems to be obscured by others, I found it by accident myself.

3yr 4

LV 12

Pouya4133

I like Dark novels with evil mC in them Plus the Canabalism Gives it an advantage oVer other novels if you keep him evil and not turn him into a bero and a good Mc it will beone of the bests. (You know Mc can eat his lovers literaly )

3yr 4

LV 1

Easy_Tiger

Loving this story so far. This work is proof that strong characters make stories worth reading. The protagonist is a fantastic character and is a blast to follow. The humor from his twisted world views and personality make each chapter such an entertaining read. Loved how he talked back to the demon after his death. I also never thought I could find so much amusement in reading a chapter about a baby in his mother's womb, but here you have it. As for the story itself, it is certainly a unique one and I look forward to seeing where it goes in future installments. The author seems to have a clear idea of where he is taking it. From a technical standpoint, this is a well-written work with little to no errors I could notice and the prose flows nicely, making for easy reading. Great original story that is well worth checking out.

3yr 3

LV 4

UI_GUN

Story is good but the way Author implement and narrate it is terrible every single character wants to kill MC god knows why

1yr 2

LV 1

yash_tawniya

Hello I am currently in chapter 258 so I started reading order of chaos to know backstory of arsene I just wanna know one thing please.. Is lilith (yura) aurelia?? please author ans

2yr 2

LV 3

Loki_777

I have read 30+ chapter and i must say that its a good novel , the mc is dark but still care for people , the only bad thing is that we dont really know anything about the mc . I recommend this novel .😁

3yr 2

LV 1

Olympu

Only thing I hate is that I the user is exclaiming the other out , instead of ! Which makes no sense whatsoever. Also whenever the person asks a question, the author puts , instead of ? Which is not how you use a comma in speech whatsoever. Other than that, amazing book.

3yr 2

LV 12

Zero_Two1

One of the best books i read on webnovel. MC has all the characteristics i like. Mostly MC that are described as evil are not evil but in this book i can say hes rly evil xD

3yr 2