Synopsis
The fate of a mortal was seen through the tiny pages of a book.
The future of an Immortal was unpredictable; covered by the Divine Clouds.
In the end... Don't mortals end up ascending to what we call an Immortal?
The System the Gods created is messed up... Nothing can fix that.
Hidden deeply in the darkness, away from the eyes of the Gods stands a single silhouette... A hegemon of power.
The Eternal, he knows no rules, no fate... He simply exists.
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Writing quality is superb, the stability of updates is superb, the story development is superb, this novel is basically the epitome of superb, I guarantee. I'm from the future, just take my word for it. I suggest you read this superb story, but before you do, just remember that this is a story of a young boy (as usual in Xianxia) in his journey to the top of the food chain... again, so you already know this is a superb story from the get-go. 10/10 would read again and again and again... if I had amnesia again and again and again. Why are you even reading this? Read the novel instead!
I just dont understand this story its all over the place first he becomes some divine lord or whatever the hell that means, he gets instant killed by some space black hole and he thinks its part of his cultivation ud think he would learn that having that cultivation technique and these weird circumstances were caused by a third party than he gets reincarnated but cant even fight off people who he considers trash especially that empress I dont understand a lot of it theirs just too many conflicting plot holes like if hes a divine lord how come he cant protect himself from her and why would he give up even if his life is on the line he can just reincarnate he was never one to back down in the beginning chapters and now he does. I just dont understand how he can go from killing everyone who messes with him to some ***** kid whos talking about family he should know their not even his real family from the other chapters they could be using him like everyone else he started out ruthless and lost it after his reincarnation and I have no idea how strong everyone else the cultivation levels are never explained and they dont make sense at all I cant tell if hes really overpowered or ridiculously weak its like he lost all his cultivating experience after his reincarnation, I guess you can argue that he lost his cultivation or that the empress is really strong but than why would she be sealed in a child with no1 watching him or checking on him it just makes no sense but maybe im wrong I never read MGA so Im not entirely sure of the background but in my opinion the people sealed inside him just makes this novel too confusing for me
A cohesive and structured tale with much more to expect as it progresses. I enjoy this tale partly because the story of MGA lost my attention and interest due to the MC falling into the trappings of a "anti-hero" a-la Punisher
I just notice that writing review will have exp!!!!!!So,forgive me for my worthless review my lord!!!!!! ...........................................................................................................................................
It’s a rank over the average story of this genre. I didnt know what to expect at first but it surprised me with it’s cohesiveness. Anyway, it's a great book.
Spoiler de révélation It’s a rank over the average story of this genre. I didnt know what to expect at first but it surprised me with it’s cohesiveness. Anyway, it's a great book.
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The story is pretty good. The plot and the idea are pretty nice. Thanks for your hard work and good luck in all of your chapters. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😊👍👍
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Iv'e been waiting for about 2 months and now here it is!! Wow the story was really great! The mc has a good background which can use when he would be transferred in the MGA world. Although there is no harem at least the MC chose the one of a kind partner hehehe really worth it!! Don't worry author I well keep voting for your novel and please make a romantic h-scene please! Well that is up to you author and the others if they would also ask for it. I am really not into some kind of a weirdo and addicted to you know, I mean h****. But guys is always guys so there's an expectations to it specially because the original story also has one but was mild. -peace!!!
WORTHY OF READING AND NOT BEING DISAPPOINTED THE PLOT AND TWIST ARE REALLY GOOD ...................................................................................................................................
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hey! it's new novel again! well... I'll just give you 5 stars, because i like Your other works just hope this one will good. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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When the novel continues to wait for you for a long time, I would like to give a date of continuity or announce a stop in order not to keep waiting
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U cant make money with fanfic.. So just create your own novel.. And if u do, just notify us here or on the chapter.. I keep hold your novel on my library untill u decide.. Keep it up dude..
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Hello, This is an Eternal Story of a young boy I guess... EXPECTED Schedule 7-14 Chapters, the same as my TDG fanfic. I'm looking for a book cover, so anyone who has one CONTACT ME ON DISCORD(OWN WORK ONLY I don't want copies xD) Void Emperor #8692