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When the novel continues to wait for you for a long time, I would like to give a date of continuity or announce a stop in order not to keep waiting
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I just dont understand this story its all over the place first he becomes some divine lord or whatever the hell that means, he gets instant killed by some space black hole and he thinks its part of his cultivation ud think he would learn that having that cultivation technique and these weird circumstances were caused by a third party than he gets reincarnated but cant even fight off people who he considers trash especially that empress I dont understand a lot of it theirs just too many conflicting plot holes like if hes a divine lord how come he cant protect himself from her and why would he give up even if his life is on the line he can just reincarnate he was never one to back down in the beginning chapters and now he does. I just dont understand how he can go from killing everyone who messes with him to some ***** kid whos talking about family he should know their not even his real family from the other chapters they could be using him like everyone else he started out ruthless and lost it after his reincarnation and I have no idea how strong everyone else the cultivation levels are never explained and they dont make sense at all I cant tell if hes really overpowered or ridiculously weak its like he lost all his cultivating experience after his reincarnation, I guess you can argue that he lost his cultivation or that the empress is really strong but than why would she be sealed in a child with no1 watching him or checking on him it just makes no sense but maybe im wrong I never read MGA so Im not entirely sure of the background but in my opinion the people sealed inside him just makes this novel too confusing for me
U cant make money with fanfic.. So just create your own novel.. And if u do, just notify us here or on the chapter.. I keep hold your novel on my library untill u decide.. Keep it up dude..
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Great job on this one and only. Thanks, For exxxxxxxxxxppppppxxxxxxxxxxppppp0pppppppppppppppppp......awesome ßssssssssssssssssssss for this is the only one fanfic on this story......thanks......
Hey I've been reading your stories since the TDG fanfic and all I got to say is that I don't think I can read this. Your story is not bad in fact I'm fairly interested in reading it but the conversation between mc and the other characters doesn't mix with the era of the novel so IMO it loses that feeling. So I thank you for the fun novel and I hope you still continue XD I'll just hop on another time from what I can remember there is gonna be a DMWG fanfic in the so yeah :P
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Great story,great chapter,for the EEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEE,XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DONT BLAME ME,BLAME WEBNOVEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A cohesive and structured tale with much more to expect as it progresses. I enjoy this tale partly because the story of MGA lost my attention and interest due to the MC falling into the trappings of a "anti-hero" a-la Punisher
a good story.....................................................................................................................................................................................................
nice novel, realy good history and realy good characters jijijijiji , want more chapters jijijijiji , i no speak english realy good, but you understand what i try to say jijijijiji
POWER OF EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good novel ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
+5 EXP '.......' ......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... . Why would I need 140 characters to review >.> +5 EXP '.......' ......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... . Why would I need 140 characters to review >.> +5 EXP '.......' ......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... . Why would I need 140 characters to review >.>
Nice Story so far....can not wait for the story chapters to start...just from reading the prologue chapters i can not stop shaking from excitement..not enough patience waiting for the real story to start...hahahahaha...thanks again dude...
I just notice that writing review will have exp!!!!!!So,forgive me for my worthless review my lord!!!!!! ...........................................................................................................................................
Another boring novel from the same author. Sigh......................................................................................................................................................
It’s a rank over the average story of this genre. I didnt know what to expect at first but it surprised me with it’s cohesiveness. Anyway, it's a great book.
Spoiler de révélation It’s a rank over the average story of this genre. I didnt know what to expect at first but it surprised me with it’s cohesiveness. Anyway, it's a great book.
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The story is pretty good. The plot and the idea are pretty nice. Thanks for your hard work and good luck in all of your chapters. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😊👍👍
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All I will say is that. I drop it due to the fact it was doing the same thing over and over again it got kind of boring also the fact that he ate people due to being angry just downright ridiculous and disgusting
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When the novel continues to wait for you for a long time, I would like to give a date of continuity or announce a stop in order not to keep waiting
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I just dont understand this story its all over the place first he becomes some divine lord or whatever the hell that means, he gets instant killed by some space black hole and he thinks its part of his cultivation ud think he would learn that having that cultivation technique and these weird circumstances were caused by a third party than he gets reincarnated but cant even fight off people who he considers trash especially that empress I dont understand a lot of it theirs just too many conflicting plot holes like if hes a divine lord how come he cant protect himself from her and why would he give up even if his life is on the line he can just reincarnate he was never one to back down in the beginning chapters and now he does. I just dont understand how he can go from killing everyone who messes with him to some ***** kid whos talking about family he should know their not even his real family from the other chapters they could be using him like everyone else he started out ruthless and lost it after his reincarnation and I have no idea how strong everyone else the cultivation levels are never explained and they dont make sense at all I cant tell if hes really overpowered or ridiculously weak its like he lost all his cultivating experience after his reincarnation, I guess you can argue that he lost his cultivation or that the empress is really strong but than why would she be sealed in a child with no1 watching him or checking on him it just makes no sense but maybe im wrong I never read MGA so Im not entirely sure of the background but in my opinion the people sealed inside him just makes this novel too confusing for me
U cant make money with fanfic.. So just create your own novel.. And if u do, just notify us here or on the chapter.. I keep hold your novel on my library untill u decide.. Keep it up dude..
Spoiler de révélation Great job on this one and only. Thanks, For exxxxxxxxxxppppppxxxxxxxxxxppppp0pppppppppppppppppp......awesome ßssssssssssssssssssss for this is the only one fanfic on this story......thanks......
Hey I've been reading your stories since the TDG fanfic and all I got to say is that I don't think I can read this. Your story is not bad in fact I'm fairly interested in reading it but the conversation between mc and the other characters doesn't mix with the era of the novel so IMO it loses that feeling. So I thank you for the fun novel and I hope you still continue XD I'll just hop on another time from what I can remember there is gonna be a DMWG fanfic in the so yeah :P
Spoiler de révélation Great story,great chapter,for the EEEEEE3EEEEEEEEEEE,XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DONT BLAME ME,BLAME WEBNOVEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A cohesive and structured tale with much more to expect as it progresses. I enjoy this tale partly because the story of MGA lost my attention and interest due to the MC falling into the trappings of a "anti-hero" a-la Punisher
a good story.....................................................................................................................................................................................................
nice novel, realy good history and realy good characters jijijijiji , want more chapters jijijijiji , i no speak english realy good, but you understand what i try to say jijijijiji
POWER OF EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good novel ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
+5 EXP '.......' ......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... . Why would I need 140 characters to review >.> +5 EXP '.......' ......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... . Why would I need 140 characters to review >.> +5 EXP '.......' ......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...... . Why would I need 140 characters to review >.>
Nice Story so far....can not wait for the story chapters to start...just from reading the prologue chapters i can not stop shaking from excitement..not enough patience waiting for the real story to start...hahahahaha...thanks again dude...
I just notice that writing review will have exp!!!!!!So,forgive me for my worthless review my lord!!!!!! ...........................................................................................................................................
Another boring novel from the same author. Sigh......................................................................................................................................................
It’s a rank over the average story of this genre. I didnt know what to expect at first but it surprised me with it’s cohesiveness. Anyway, it's a great book.
Spoiler de révélation It’s a rank over the average story of this genre. I didnt know what to expect at first but it surprised me with it’s cohesiveness. Anyway, it's a great book.
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The story is pretty good. The plot and the idea are pretty nice. Thanks for your hard work and good luck in all of your chapters. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😊👍👍
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All I will say is that. I drop it due to the fact it was doing the same thing over and over again it got kind of boring also the fact that he ate people due to being angry just downright ridiculous and disgusting
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