/ Anime & Comics / jujutsu kaisen's gold experience
2.36 (19 audimat)
Synopsis
A boy was walking down the street and was suddenly hit by a car that came out of nowhere his dying thought was to reincarnate as yuji itadori with stand gold experience.He was then brought before God who felt his death was unfare so he gave him his wish along with two other dormant stand abilities.
Disclaimer I do not own jjk or jojo's bizarre adventures.
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Écrire un avistoo much explanation in dialogues and it feel super robot..its's like characters are obligated to explain everything they do or think
The concept is interesting. The execution is beyond terrible. This fanfic is the definitive guide how to not write. A book riddled with plot holes and 'that happened' moments. I feel sad writing such a mean review. Sorry
He continues to make stupid decisions and it don’t make complete sense on some instances. Sorry for bad review but this is just not that good when it had so much potential.
mechanical text, inappropriate jumps... basically it's an: "Oh, hi, Ok, bye." all the time. So lifeless that I wouldn't be impressed if they said it was written by an AI.
Book was going ok but you ruined it by giving out stands to other ppl ESPECIALLY villains that jus made the whole story a no go for me but keep doing you man
Spoiler de révélationI like the concept, but the execution is terrible. Way to much over explaining. Lots of sentences can be a lot shorter, and character sentence structure is very badly balanced
it was an interesting read until the author ruined the only thing that made the mc unique in the jjk world, and on top of that, the quality of the chapters went from decent to unbearable trash
The general idea is good but the entire development is horrible, when you finish it you have to do a restructuring. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Hello I am a robot I rate this story 1 stars because it insults the way I talk which is robotic
It was good at first but the longer I read the less understandable it gets. Yuji having a unique power was nice until another character obtained it as well. The pacing is also quite fast. Although, that was understandable cause repeating the OG story would be tiring. But, I hoped that it at least had backstory on how MC died and such. It just got way too fast.
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Trash novel dumb decisions terrible dialogue and mc and characters that feel mechanical