Why are you using “” for thoughts and speech
"Sometimes she is a bit too dramatic. Her emotions shift far too quickly to be normal. One moment she could be smiling, and the next moment she could be sad. Heck, even my classmates show some of these signs. Is it because this world, in essence, is like an anime world? Or am I just making a mountain out of a molehill?"
Anime & Comics · Moon_wacher
You should probably switch these since a lot of readers will get confused and complain Happened to me
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Anime & Comics · Moon_wacher
When I’m done farming the land
I grab my brain and place it inside the barely alive curse.
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
So many grammar and writing mistakes that it makes it almost impossible to read. The characters are pretty robotic and cardboard cut and the plot isnt bad just that the execution is just terrible
Such a stupid name
Rias also remembered the famous incident in underworld, which give him the name Annihilator.
Anime & Comics · Dreamer_of_Unknown
Why can he only use it on himself?
Heh… such stupid f***** sh**** writing am I right??🤬🤬 it’s making me f****** cringe so badly that I’m gonna sh** myself 😐😐
"Power is not everything. I've told you this hundreds of times. And you already know that Sona is an amazing tactician, to the extent that even I'm impressed by her capabilities sometimes. And your cousin Rias is the best peerage manager I've seen in recent times. Every single member of her weak and tiny peerage would instantly give up their lives for her, without any question." He explained.
Anime & Comics · Dreamer_of_Unknown
Triple upload but you left on a cliffhanger
And of course I want to hear you guesses for who you believe the thief is, yes it can be deduced at the very least given the information I've provided so I'd love to hear theories.
Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda
Anyways here's a triple upload and if you want updates on story progress or anything join discord.
Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda
I almost read this fic but realised who wrote it. Close call nearly read some more Old Storage Works
Start with Limitless Technique (MCU)
Movies · OLDstorage