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Immortal Odyssey: My Family Is Invincible
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Synopsis
I GOT CLICHED!!!.
When Xu Qianghua opened his eyes, he found out that he was reborn back in time before the game Immortal Odyssey: Paths of Destiny merged with his world.
With only a few items left with him, Xu Qianghua is stunned and unhappy because he had a good life and was not like those who either betrayed or died to some really powerful monster.
Until he saw the introduction of them:
Family Token (Chaos): A small world with Immortal veins and high-level spirit crystal mines….
Key of the Ancients(Chaos): A mini-world with infinite monsters and riches to collect….
While Xu Qianghua also deals with his wives
Xu Qianghua: Mother-in-law this is wrong
Sister Meiying: This is not wrong, I need to check if my daughter can be satisfied.
The jumps on Xu Qianghua
After a few hours
Liu Anwei: Brother Qiang, what were you talking with my mom about?
Xu Qianghua: Nothing, your mother wanted you to have a new sibling, so she asked for my help
Liu Anwei: What?
Read as Xu Qianghua and his now new try again with a different path from his past life which might lead them to ruin or become the strongest family out there.
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No NTR
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PS: This is my first novel so I will have a lot of mistakes, so if you find any please feel free to comment and I will fix it as soon as possible.
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This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Give it a try; as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I will improve as I keep on writing PS. Positive Suggestions are always open and welcome.
I have only read the first couple of chapters, but I want to say that I had been a very enjoyable read and I hope you continue to upload. Great Job 👌
keep going my friend the path is long but what u have created is good have faith in yourself and keep going
The book is very enjoyable to read and the plot flow is very nice. The character development is also good, I can't wait to read more chapters.
After reading everything till here i would like to say a few words. I like the setting and the fact that you will soon start the game world, i like the smut and the progression so far. What i didn't like about the history is the beggning, i can say that i would change the order of some chapters and for me would make more sense. Keep going
love the story author keep going. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
this kind of history is not for me because I disapprove the way you give everything to the MC and you make his mysterious and omnipotent family manipulate everything including the system. it's your story and I respect that but i was expecting something more like RSSG (Reincarnation of the strongest sword god) and not this.
Spoiler de révélation
I, Melon dao approves this scripture and decided to add it to my forbidden library of culture. This venerable is very pleased as you are doing a honorable job of teaching and spreading culture and hope you continue to this sacred quest. This scripture belong to the genre of game to reality and Mc will develop a invincible family with different kinds of waifus. Last but the least, This Scripture Has No yuri and Ntr!