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I summoned Tom at the start in One Piece World
4.64 (43 audimat)
Synopsis
Adrian, who accidentally fell into the world of pirates, obtained a strange magic array that can summon characters from different worlds. His first partner turned out to be Tom Cat!
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Just Tom alone makes this fanfic 5 star worthy. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Because Tom is here it's easily 5 stars and also the writing quality is pretty great if you compare it to other chinese fanfic novels. The world building is great too, also I hope he can't summon women from other worlds because it would make this amazing fanfic turn into a mess, I just wan't a house cat with his owner living peacefully in his tavern growing stronger each day not a horn dog. But it is what it is.
When I first read the summary,I thought it would be one of the cringe fanfics.But I was wrong.This is amazing and fresh.Keep writing like this and this fic will become one of the best.
The story is average to me, even with Tom being here. It could have been interesting but the MC is just a little bland in personalitu and the story really outs him and Tom at a single location. Instead of having an adventure, getting into hijinks and making it extremely fun, its just them managing a tavern. Kinda makes the whole having tom here kinda disappointing. Whats the point in having all these interesting characters when all they do is just remain in one place. Even if it is planned that they would go on an adventure in the future, it has already been how many chapters.
Well, it's a Chinese tale, you know what a slave to the system has, a protagonist without charisma or goals, destruction of the established lohica (that of the anime). Still, this story is decent, mostly because of the system summoned characters from other anime.
It is good in the early chapter but later its more like a slice of life type of story. It is quite funny but later i got bored.
Los personajes no tienen que seguir sus ordenes, los objetos que invoca son inútiles y los que son útiles no les da un uso aun ( capitulo 40), solo ha usado 1 para su conveniencia y el modo que gana dinero es atendiendo un bar cuando con el único objeto qué ha usado y con la ayuda de Tom gano 8m con solo 3 piratas
goofy ahh novel, I can hear the "AAAAAHHHH" Scream and other SFX from Tom and Jerry as i read this💀
always remember that oda steal the idea of gear 5 from Tom and Jerry that mean that Tom is 3 Billion belly worth. so everyone is just courting death messing with him(5 star for my childhood hero)
For the reason alone that Tom from Tom and Jerry is here, I would rate as the best of the best. if Jerry here as well, I will worship the book and would likely write a five page essay about it's structure!
This is a good Chinese fic, the author did amazing job to translate, I even start reading the raw one, from reading the raw version it's slow paste and some name problems, but it's better than the other ones that I have read so far.give it a try if you wish to read to pass your time, the raw story or you can just wait for the translation.
It's an amazing story, don't let it fall please................................................ It's an amazing story, don't let it fall please................................................ It's an amazing story, don't let it fall please................................................
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I don't if it's Chinese novel but Tom is here is very funny. He's one of the former Avenger with Power of Amazo.