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The start was good but the longer it went the more you could see the problems. After the first 20 chapters you could notice that it is going for a slice of life, slice of life isn't a problem, it being boring is.
Melhor do que pensei que seria..........Melhor do que pensei que seria..........Melhor do que pensei que seria..........Melhor do que pensei que seria..........Melhor do que pensei que seria..........
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because of Tom being in this world, it is an acceptable book deserving a five starsnow more importantly is Tom is immortal god like being. he's just unlucky
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Tom tom tom tom tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom to to toooom
always remember that oda steal the idea of gear 5 from Tom and Jerry that mean that Tom is 3 Billion belly worth. so everyone is just courting death messing with him(5 star for my childhood hero)
I just finished reading chapter 1 and I am already hooked. Tom is quite funny and the fights give me some of that Pokemon nostalgia for some reason. Probably because the MC uses his summon like a Pokemon. The writing is good, few grammatical errors but not too bad to affect the quality of the chapter.
now I never watched one piece, but Tom is really making me consider reading this🤣
Thhe last thing I remember I was hit by a truck with a plate number IMU 699. Then I woke up with fur all over my body and walked on fours. Hi my name is Joyboy, and I reincarnated as a cat.
It is good in the early chapter but later its more like a slice of life type of story. It is quite funny but later i got bored.
currently on chapter 78, im having a lot of fun reading it and always look forward to updates from the author, highly recommen Good good good good good good
Los personajes no tienen que seguir sus ordenes, los objetos que invoca son inútiles y los que son útiles no les da un uso aun ( capitulo 40), solo ha usado 1 para su conveniencia y el modo que gana dinero es atendiendo un bar cuando con el único objeto qué ha usado y con la ayuda de Tom gano 8m con solo 3 piratas
You got Tom? Congrats You got a five-star review. And it's very suprisingly good. I can even hear the Tom's laugh sound fx. In short, This is masterpiece( No I'm not talking about masterpiece H€NT@I)
The story is average to me, even with Tom being here. It could have been interesting but the MC is just a little bland in personalitu and the story really outs him and Tom at a single location. Instead of having an adventure, getting into hijinks and making it extremely fun, its just them managing a tavern. Kinda makes the whole having tom here kinda disappointing. Whats the point in having all these interesting characters when all they do is just remain in one place. Even if it is planned that they would go on an adventure in the future, it has already been how many chapters.
it's actually really good only complaint is there is no romantic or sexual progress with artoria.
Well, it's a Chinese tale, you know what a slave to the system has, a protagonist without charisma or goals, destruction of the established lohica (that of the anime). Still, this story is decent, mostly because of the system summoned characters from other anime.
goofy ahh novel, I can hear the "AAAAAHHHH" Scream and other SFX from Tom and Jerry as i read this💀
It's an amazing story, don't let it fall please................................................ It's an amazing story, don't let it fall please................................................ It's an amazing story, don't let it fall please................................................
Ah yeah, Tom. the Only Rival For Joyboy. ⢐⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⣕⢕⢕⠕⠁⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⠅⡄⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕ ⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⠅⢗⢕⠕⣠⠄⣗⢕⢕⠕⢕⢕⢕⠕⢠⣿⠐⢕⢕⢕⠑⢕⢕⠵⢕ ⢕⢕⢕⢕⠁⢜⠕⢁⣴⣿⡇⢓⢕⢵⢐⢕⢕⠕⢁⣾⢿⣧⠑⢕⢕⠄⢑⢕⠅⢕ ⢕⢕⠵⢁⠔⢁⣤⣤⣶⣶⣶⡐⣕⢽⠐⢕⠕⣡⣾⣶⣶⣶⣤⡁⢓⢕⠄⢑⢅⢑ ⠍⣧⠄⣶⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣔⢕⢄⢡⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⡑⢕⢤⠱⢐ ⢠⢕⠅⣾⣿⠋⢿⣿⣿⣿⠉⣿⣿⣷⣦⣶⣽⣿⣿⠈⣿⣿⣿⣿⠏⢹⣷⣷⡅⢐ ⣔⢕⢥⢻⣿⡀⠈⠛⠛⠁⢠⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡀⠈⠛⠛⠁⠄⣼⣿⣿⡇⢔ ⢕⢕⢽⢸⢟⢟⢖⢖⢤⣶⡟⢻⣿⡿⠻⣿⣿⡟⢀⣿⣦⢤⢤⢔⢞⢿⢿⣿⠁⢕ ⢕⢕⠅⣐⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⣿⣿⡄⠛⢀⣦⠈⠛⢁⣼⣿⢗⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⡏⣘⢕ ⢕⢕⠅⢓⣕⣕⣕⣕⣵⣿⣿⣿⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣕⢕⢕⢕⢕⡵⢀⢕⢕ ⢑⢕⠃⡈⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢃⢕⢕⢕
Brilliant! I have nothing to say except that this fanfic is the result of someone who manages to unleash 100% brain to write this fantastic fanfic.
The start was good but the longer it went the more you could see the problems. After the first 20 chapters you could notice that it is going for a slice of life, slice of life isn't a problem, it being boring is.
Melhor do que pensei que seria..........Melhor do que pensei que seria..........Melhor do que pensei que seria..........Melhor do que pensei que seria..........Melhor do que pensei que seria..........
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
because of Tom being in this world, it is an acceptable book deserving a five starsnow more importantly is Tom is immortal god like being. he's just unlucky
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Tom tom tom tom tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom Tom to to toooom
always remember that oda steal the idea of gear 5 from Tom and Jerry that mean that Tom is 3 Billion belly worth. so everyone is just courting death messing with him(5 star for my childhood hero)
I just finished reading chapter 1 and I am already hooked. Tom is quite funny and the fights give me some of that Pokemon nostalgia for some reason. Probably because the MC uses his summon like a Pokemon. The writing is good, few grammatical errors but not too bad to affect the quality of the chapter.
now I never watched one piece, but Tom is really making me consider reading this🤣
Thhe last thing I remember I was hit by a truck with a plate number IMU 699. Then I woke up with fur all over my body and walked on fours. Hi my name is Joyboy, and I reincarnated as a cat.
It is good in the early chapter but later its more like a slice of life type of story. It is quite funny but later i got bored.
currently on chapter 78, im having a lot of fun reading it and always look forward to updates from the author, highly recommen Good good good good good good
Los personajes no tienen que seguir sus ordenes, los objetos que invoca son inútiles y los que son útiles no les da un uso aun ( capitulo 40), solo ha usado 1 para su conveniencia y el modo que gana dinero es atendiendo un bar cuando con el único objeto qué ha usado y con la ayuda de Tom gano 8m con solo 3 piratas
You got Tom? Congrats You got a five-star review. And it's very suprisingly good. I can even hear the Tom's laugh sound fx. In short, This is masterpiece( No I'm not talking about masterpiece H€NT@I)
The story is average to me, even with Tom being here. It could have been interesting but the MC is just a little bland in personalitu and the story really outs him and Tom at a single location. Instead of having an adventure, getting into hijinks and making it extremely fun, its just them managing a tavern. Kinda makes the whole having tom here kinda disappointing. Whats the point in having all these interesting characters when all they do is just remain in one place. Even if it is planned that they would go on an adventure in the future, it has already been how many chapters.
it's actually really good only complaint is there is no romantic or sexual progress with artoria.
Well, it's a Chinese tale, you know what a slave to the system has, a protagonist without charisma or goals, destruction of the established lohica (that of the anime). Still, this story is decent, mostly because of the system summoned characters from other anime.
goofy ahh novel, I can hear the "AAAAAHHHH" Scream and other SFX from Tom and Jerry as i read this💀
It's an amazing story, don't let it fall please................................................ It's an amazing story, don't let it fall please................................................ It's an amazing story, don't let it fall please................................................
Ah yeah, Tom. the Only Rival For Joyboy. ⢐⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⣕⢕⢕⠕⠁⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⠅⡄⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕ ⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⠅⢗⢕⠕⣠⠄⣗⢕⢕⠕⢕⢕⢕⠕⢠⣿⠐⢕⢕⢕⠑⢕⢕⠵⢕ ⢕⢕⢕⢕⠁⢜⠕⢁⣴⣿⡇⢓⢕⢵⢐⢕⢕⠕⢁⣾⢿⣧⠑⢕⢕⠄⢑⢕⠅⢕ ⢕⢕⠵⢁⠔⢁⣤⣤⣶⣶⣶⡐⣕⢽⠐⢕⠕⣡⣾⣶⣶⣶⣤⡁⢓⢕⠄⢑⢅⢑ ⠍⣧⠄⣶⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣔⢕⢄⢡⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⡑⢕⢤⠱⢐ ⢠⢕⠅⣾⣿⠋⢿⣿⣿⣿⠉⣿⣿⣷⣦⣶⣽⣿⣿⠈⣿⣿⣿⣿⠏⢹⣷⣷⡅⢐ ⣔⢕⢥⢻⣿⡀⠈⠛⠛⠁⢠⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡀⠈⠛⠛⠁⠄⣼⣿⣿⡇⢔ ⢕⢕⢽⢸⢟⢟⢖⢖⢤⣶⡟⢻⣿⡿⠻⣿⣿⡟⢀⣿⣦⢤⢤⢔⢞⢿⢿⣿⠁⢕ ⢕⢕⠅⣐⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⣿⣿⡄⠛⢀⣦⠈⠛⢁⣼⣿⢗⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⢕⡏⣘⢕ ⢕⢕⠅⢓⣕⣕⣕⣕⣵⣿⣿⣿⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣕⢕⢕⢕⢕⡵⢀⢕⢕ ⢑⢕⠃⡈⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢃⢕⢕⢕
Brilliant! I have nothing to say except that this fanfic is the result of someone who manages to unleash 100% brain to write this fantastic fanfic.