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I'm Finn Mertens and I've Become a Player!
4.82 (37 audimat)
Synopsis
Charles' death was not planned, not when he was killed instead of someone else.
But, we know that Truck-kun doesn't do his job properly.
Charles was then sent to meet 'God/Author' and God/Author let Charles choose the world he wanted to go to and some Op's powers.
Follow Charles ( Aka Finn Mertens ) on his adventure in a Post Apocalyptic world.
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Instead of putting auto five stars cause it’s adventure time ima give my honest opinion the author seems indecisive in some choices examples are the class and all that stuff somethin I find weird is his character design he’s to young to be lookin like that even if you don’t update the story anymore at least have some standards to do a time skip before you start making him look like a 18 year old and the relationship is pretty forced he makes up a story about how he got a vision of the future where Gumball and The vamp who’s name I’m not spelling are his girlfriends overall it’s about a two star novel but it’s adventure time so 3
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Absolutely amazing!!I havent seen Adventure Time in a long time but I still love this concept and what you have done wit it. The grammar is perfect. The characters feel real and not like cardboard cutouts. I cant say much about story and updating but I do hope you update daily. I cant say much about World backround because it ony has 3 chaps but its looking good. Overall its an amazing novel and I hope you dont drop it.
I don't know much about Adventure Time, but I know it's a very interesting universe and full of things to explore. I really liked what I've read so far. I just hope this doesn't become a Harem +18. And there aren't too many problems with your grammar, and even if it was bad, 99% of fan-fic readers don't really care about it. Overall, I hope to be able to read more in the future.
So far it's been pretty good I'll be honest I didn't really have any hopes on this being good but you knocked it out of the park amazing job Author-kun
Author, please do not drop this. Frankly, seeing such a well written story on a fanfic of adventure time in just ‘chef’s kiss’. Please continue being yourself and writing such wonderful chapters. - A salmon[img=recommend]
I'm Mozambican and I only know the basics of English grammar so I'm sorry if my review is difficult to understand. This is first the only adventure time story I found after so much searching, I was stuck from the first to the last chapter I'm looking forward to more chapters, the character so far is being well built I just hope it doesn't turn into a harem with Finn getting one lot of princesses. The construction of the other characters does not deviate from what I already knew, so it gives one more point for the story, frequent updating is worth one more point... in conclusion, it's a story worth reading
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The Adventure Time novel is amazing. I hope the author continues to update every day. It has been a long time since I've read such a high quality novel.
This FF is very interesting because I've never seen an adventure time fan fiction and mc doesn't seem naive and smart .......................................................
more please. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. .. . . . . . . . .. . . . .
Haaahhh, another Unreasonable smartass Mc, recommended if your new to this type of clicks, in other words Fanfiction on low levels with nonsense charades... You know half assed, I'm-the-writer-my-rules shtick.... Yeah, I think that's all... Also imma gonna 5 star this review so maybe the writer won't demolish this Rev. .. Honestly you can't receive a logical review with illogical work...
Good story much potential hope the author keeps up the good work ajdjwjjwjjensnejejejejsnsnsnsndndndjdjdjdndndnsndndnndbddjdjhdhndhdjdndjdjdejjd
wooo la primera vez que leo un fánfic de este personaje jaja , ojalá actualices todos los días y también que tenga buen romance y si hay harém mejor jeje ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Yooooooo Adventure time fanfic ............ . . .... .. . . . . . . . . ...........,....jfjddjjfjhffjfjfjhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhhfhfhffhfhfh
I love adventure time and finding this was great I can’t wait for you to update it more. So far not much has been going on but i hope more action and stuff comes in the co ming chapters
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Honestly I've really enjoyed it so far. I don't usually like gamer systems since they're so overused but it just kinda fits in this fanfic. I've enjoyed reading so far and am looking forward to more. Please don't drop!!
Well so far it's great. There is constant updates and it is developing okay and I like the personality of the mc and the background is adventure time so not much to say. all in all it's good but sometimes a word is misspelled or a word is repeated and it kind of breaks immersion a little but not anything big tbh so keep it up.
1o: Something you have to keep in mind from the beginning is that English is not my native language. Please forgive me for any mistakes. 2º: As for the pairings. Well, I think you already know ... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 3º: I will try to merge the world of Time of Adventure with The Game. 4º: I will try to put other people's point of view, but I'm not very good at that kind of thing. I can try, but I won't promise. 5º: Happy reading!