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Heroes: The Cancer of the Multiverse
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In a dying universe, a supernatural being chooses Atlas to save the multiverse from collapse. The threat comes from the increasing number of heroes being reincarnated into other universes. Atlas is tasked with hunting down these heroes, who have been granted powerful boons that make them nearly invincible. Atlas must rely on his wit and surprise to take down these powerful foes, and each new universe he enters presents a unique challenge with a different power system to master. With only his experience to aid him, Atlas begins his mission to save the multiverse. Will he succeed, or will the heroes prove too powerful to defeat?
This story will feature dynamic character development, with a focus on character interactions rather than solely on the whole hero buisness. The Mc will also not always get what he wants or needs. He will only be able to fight the Hero with abilities he can reasonably get, and naturally, each universe he goes through will give him more of an advantage compared to the common people, but the real Heroes will always have something like classical fanfiction heroes, which means powers like Devil Fruits, Haki, Ninjutusus, systems, cultivation, powerful bloodlines, magic, Marvel or DC powers, an inbuilt AI or other weird but powerful abilities.
P.S.: I don't own the rights to most universes that will be explored.
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I really liked the idea of a fanfic, but its execution....disgusting. First: a person who knows that either the whole world will be destroyed or he will die - is attached to people as if it were necessary. And his sociopathism is no excuse. He had a wife, he had a lot of acquaintances in the games. But no, the main character is shown as if he never even had anyone to talk to. Second: for some reason, mc thinks that legilimency is a great ability and starts to develop it before oclumency. Idiot. Occlumency is a way to protect the mind and also a way to empower the brain. He should have asked his mother to teach it. And in general, before sending, ask Adam a question, will his knowledge of past lives be protected? He read and looked through ALL the information, where mind reading was mentioned more than once. He even watched Fantastic Beasts, so he must know for sure. Only because of this mind mc can put zero points. Thirdly, he sees what causes changes in the canon simply by his existence (by the way, where is the #AU tenant??? would see him - he would not even start reading.), but at the same time he does not try to analyze the actions of other people. Fourth: Ron snores. I am absolutely sure that a person who has studied potions for five years (±) knows if there is a potion that will help you stop snoring. Or a spell. In extreme cases - Silencio. Bottom line - Great idea, but I hate reading about stupid characters. Google translated.
I read the synopsis and it sooned sooo cool what I understand was that mc was a kind of purger that's tasked with protecting the universe I'm very excited to give it a try and I hope i won't be disappointed [img=coins][img=update]
Honestly started off as one of the great works similar to many but the character of the Mc is extremely shaky and full of inconsistency and randomness. Like if the MC is growing socially it should follow that trend but no it suddenly devolves into childishness. Growing intelligence ok good it great but suddenly it like he is high but then again suddenly mastermind level genius wow. Sorry for the rant but to anyone who is gonna read it I WOULD DEFINITELY RECOMMEND IT BUT PLEASE BEAR WITH IT AFTER THE STARTING CHAPTERS. anyway i am not gonna quit this because the plot and everything else is interesting so KUDOS but i hope the character is more mature and show consistent growth towards intelligence for the second Arc. Start of first Arc 10/10 Middle of first Arc Meh End of First Arc 7/10 Overall Story and concept 9/10
The fanfi is interesting, I think I'll stay to see its development😊. I just hope that author-sama isn't going to leave the fanfi in half like most authors do🙇🥺.
Really liked your story so far, it's been very interesting and I'm eager to see how it goes!![img=monedas][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
okay, the dialogue issue is fixed in later chapters so my previous review only applies to earlier chapters. its good, thanks for writing author-dude
Would be 1000% better if 80% of interactions weren't generalized and had instead had dialogue for all of the interactions instead of just 20%
This is definitely one of the better stories out there. While, the chapters aren’t released as frequently as others, that is more than made up by the quality of each chapter. Moreover, the story’s premise itself is really interesting. I’ve read a few other stories that have similar premises, and either the author ruins the story with bad writing or the story itself gets dropped. This story is one of the few that are in the sweet spot and make me genuinely interested in reading more to find out what will happen. The author is also really nice and responsive to comments & questions which is always a plus in my book.
Honestly I couldn’t get through the first world. Arguably ruined any and all Harry Potter FanFics I may read from now on. Downright PATHETIC mc, like a literal Whiny piece of filth crying about everything, also wastes his time on a useless FML instead of getting stronger and doing his job.
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For those that know me No harem=5 stars no questions asked