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Heaven Destroyer
4.44 (66 audimat)
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Warning: Novel is a harem, contains R-18 scenes, gore, and violence; no rape or NTR
Ayaan entered a portal that lead him to the world of magic. There, he received the legacy of the greatest demon to have lived under heaven, a magic library system he can use to level-up his magic powers.
But great power requires one to pay a great price, too. Resulting in him losing his humanity!
"Wh-what did I become!? A-A do...
This is the story of the ordinary boy who will walk an extraordinary path. This is the story of love, betrayal, revenge, and tragedy.
Follow Ayaan on his journey and find out dark-secrets of this unknown world.
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absolutely awesome story. ideal protagonist imo. doesn't go out of his way to find trouble but also doesn't go out of his way to leave trouble hanging. still early days (60ish chaps) but story development is good so far without spending too much time on any 1 part of the story. hopefully he continues to get stonger at the same pace 😉
I decided to review because I finally saw the r-18 tag come to light after 130 chaps[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The book is basically about an MC who is a simp. The abandonment of his humanity to become something rlse.....trust me, it’s not that great. He is just a lovestruck simp
mmmm, a new type of novels, power, love, fight, wars, death i really liked your novel auther and wating more from you, we are all here, so erntren us good heheheh
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A very basic story in every sense. There is nothing outstandingly bad but nothing stands out as really good either. it lacks depth(no character building or world building) and progresses from one cliche to the next. After 20 chapters, nothing really interested me enough to continue. Overall, above average for this site but lacked enough appeal for me to continue.
MC is a simp. Grammar/spelling is terrible. Novel is extreamly fast paced, It skips over a lot of details. Nothing really unique about this novel, its pretty much the same, once the MC gets some power it becomes a power reset over and over. Its pretty clear that the author doesnt have an outline of where to take his novel. its almost as if he wakes up in the morning and decides to go in a different direction everyday.
Writing quality is bad, very simple sentences with a good amount of mistakes. I am unable to even care about the story as every sentence is hurting my brain while trying to correct it.
Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever. Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly. Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.
It looked like it might have been a bit interesting. Until I actually started to read it. The sentence formation, the grammar is all not up to par. Needs a lot of improvement. . . . .
it's an overall good book but the development if too fast. The world background is kind of lacking although it's still new I guess in the near future this would be fixed. Keep up the Good Work!
The story has lots of potential but the MC is such a little bitch. I was expecting someone much more domineering after all the novels name is "Heaven Destroyer" but all I got was someone who the author tries to force the "willpower" cliché on without any willpower to speak of. Guy literally has to have his plot armour jump in twice in the first 20 chapters. The author tried to make him seem ruthless but idk man, he seems pretty pathetic. I'm hoping he gets better but atm, I'm about to drop it
I read till chapter 24 and found the plot presented at first interesting and promising, with the characters that appeared with good construction. The problem is when the story fell at the MC's hands and the 'oh-so' great intelligence started. Minor accidents really, stupidly revealing his identity (with the character not relating him to his race even after having just met one herself). Then, as if having to nerf the whatever system of the MC so that he doesn't self-destruct, the author started 'correcting' many things like elements and even the Spirit of the system... Sorry, but I will drop this as I'm already tired of forced development. thanks to the MC 'stupidity'.
Until now this is a good read. The story is well structured, the character/story development is also not too fast and it has constant updates. Not much is explained about the world until now and sometimes it‘s hard to follow since the grammar is somehow lacking a bit. The most mistakes you will see in this book will be vocabulary ones where an article or a verb is wrongly used. All in all it has great potential and the only thing which could make the story better is a editor/proofreader to reread and correct the spelling and grammar mistakes.
I discovered this novel yesterday and i found it interesting so far. Throughout the story i hope the novel as good and interesting. I recommend this novel to all the fans of new stories.
If you have had a bad day, are thoroughly annoyed with someone or something, or possibly just want to read a great book, then this is the novel for you. The book is great about murder gratification. Person bothers the mc? Not for long. This book brings a fresh look in the 'new world' genre and I am very much looking forward to see where this novel leads, or at least how it gets there!
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First thing first.. Give you a 5* rating cos I really enjoy this novel.. Pros : Story is Good.. Has lot of potential. Mc cheat and path to power seems interesting and it got me hooked right from the beginning.. Good job author. Pros : * sigh * Even though I got so hooked up n immersed in the story I can't help but feel irritated by the simple mistakes?? Of the translator or the Author. For f sake.. Please.. Even if ur not that good in grammar at least write the spellings right.. Too many wrong spellings n misplaced words.. To point out a few.. Every time we saw Mc status update we see "Mentle" power that should be "Mental" power * Hmmm * Pls at least fix this.. The spellings n grammar mistakes are an eyesore for this unpolished Novel that has a lot of potential to rise up.. Pls fix.. Asap. ** : M rooting for you Author to make this story better than it already is..'
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