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Harry Potter: MageX
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In a surprising twist of fate, Harry Potter discovers that he possesses the elusive X-gene, unlocking a whole new realm of possibilities within the wizarding world. As he navigates the challenges of adolescence at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, Harry grapples with the awakening of his mutant abilities, which allow him to absorb magical powers and abilities.
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So far it’s been good but the only thing is that it has a na artificial feel like as if an AI was given the basic structure of what should happen and it did it, it’s very stiff and to the point, there’s interaction between characters but it’s very formal and minimal, it lacks a certain human feel to it, everyone is too good or upright, even when someone does something wrong or bad there’s no real reproach or negative emotions involved even the anger seen is momentary and lacks significant impact , everyone is like an upstanding citizen of society who memories the moral code…. all in saying is that’s I feel out of touch and that I’m watching a bunch of robots through narration
Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
My only problem is that every chapter has the same speech about 'let's do this together', 'we're all family here, and we're going to help', 'great powers with great responsibilities', you know, it seems like a copy of the previous chapter, but said by another character, sometimes not even that, is the same. It's an interesting adventure idea, but it's already preconceived who is black and who is white, good and evil. There is no gray in history. At least until chapter 18.