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This Fanfic has an overpowered MC so you if don't like an overpowered MC Please Be Aware before reading.
Axel Woods was a man reborn into the World of Halo as a Genius. He was given no superpowers nor special abilities. Only through his intelligence would he strive for greatness and become the most powerful person in the Galaxy.
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Good story I guess just a lot wrong with it. Author focuses on things that would never happen and seems to not do any research before writing. The story is also heavily AU and the author focuses way to much time on bashing the government constantly. The author doesn’t seem to know if he wants a genius MC or a Stupid one. He claims he won’t do a thing yet somehow it still happens like saying no one would help me on this or no about it or something then suddenly everyone knows about it somehow. All in all the author just has a hard time actually portraying someone as a genius without a major nerf or plot holes and hate for any government.
Basically this is just a story containing explanations, lacking dialogue. I like the world design, but not your MC because he is too confident and arrogant. Besides that, you the author only made the MC the only smart one in the story, while the others are stupid and idiots. The story is just wish fulfillment (not in an adult context), the author immediately uses a method called plot armor to keep the MC on top.
A question do you have a discord and if not then I highly recommend you make one it's quite easy to do and would be helpful for communicating with your readers and such
I really like the premise for this novel. The idea of an extremely I telli gent man, going to a high tech world and gaining strength through biological and technological modification and creating an empire is awesome. The execution was terrible tho. It's obvious that the novel was written by an Ai. It feels utterly inhuman. It's so dry and factual that I feel like I would be more entertained reading a math textbook. The dialogue is so emotionless even when I can tell the author wants to portray an emotional moment. Next, is that the Mc is stupid. In his first life he was killed by the government because he made advanced technology and medical treatments and then published all that information. He learned nothing in this life and did the same thing in his second life. Exposing his intelligence and research. He obviously wasn't killed but was for some reason made into an officer in the army which is beyond impossible. An asset of his Intelligence would never see a battlefield. Moreover, he spends all his time making technological advances in military technology and just gives them away. In the prologue chapter, it says he became an expert in forerunner technology and learned how to use technology to modify his body and alter his genetics. We of course, never see the results of this. Basically it takes 30 chapters, and finally he undergoes the spartan procedure and becomes a base supersoldier. It's just utterly disappointing. When the author unrepentently said he was going to make an OP protagonist I was expecting things like atom sized nanobots, him transferring his consciousness neuron by neuron into some sort of indestructible nanotech body that was constructed by him using advanced technology and biological metallurgy to make some sort of super advanced technological homonculus that allows him to Interface with all the technology he built. I was expecting iron man. I was expecting pacific rim. I was expecting Gurren laggan. I was expecting Gundam. Instead he underwent the basic spartan procedure and made some spaceships and robots for the military. Mc is not op. Doesn't make his own empire. Doesn't make crazy tech to rule the universe like Warhammer 40k or any of the media I wrote above. It's a letdown because author promised op Mc and we got a smarter than average spartan with a high military rank. So basically we have Ai written textbook style retelling of a man who makes above average military tech. I'm sorry for the rant, but t It was such a disspointing read after what you said in your synopsis.
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heh gotta admit it was tripped me up seeing a novel cover that used the image I used for my pfp for the last 5-6 years lol but i gave this a read since I like your other works and gotta say I liked it keep up the good work on not just this novel but all of them
A+ work on Author's part. Great storyline, interesting plot and hey, it's halo. Author makes little to no grammatical errors, the story has a a pretty straightforward development, all characters have depth, a couple chapters a week, and a well explored world background. What more can we ask for? Author is Chef Ramsay up in this
Really have enjoyed everything I read so far! Can't wait to see where you go with this! Keep it up, you're doing great!!
love it so far! great job so far! can't wait for more. while a little bit of a brain think in the early chapters, I was immersed into it early on till I finally got to the end and realized I couldn't go to the next chapter just as it was heating up.
Wanted to write a review after the new galaxy it was a make it or break it moment. Glad to see it was the former. Really looking forward to the future chapters and how you blend the two franchises together
De un momento muy particular y ciertamente de manera singular haciendo o no referencia a cierto diálogo que puede o no estar relacionada con algún hipotético muñeco para ser o no ser contabilizado como 150 caracteres así poder colocar lo que en un principio se podría suponer que se escribiría a continuación. Solo para finalizar esta historia está...
absolutely one of the best halo fics I've ever read though it was missing some knowledge of the forerunners such as their massive station in deep space or the rest of the thirteen installations and not to mention the Warden himself.
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Good, может добавить ещё несколько вселенных . Звёздные врата или звёздные войны. Только вот реакция на технологии у расс цитадели какая слабая. Ведь у них ограничение размер кораблей из mass Effect а также способ сверхсветовой скорости.
I believe it was unnecessary to introduce gene seeds from warhammer 40k and the MC certainly does not need them. In my opinion halo and warhammer should be separate. Humanity in halo universe should not be possible of such feats and MC should not have such knowledge. I hope this is not a one man show because if it is then there will be no character development. still it's a good story
Honestly one of the best fanfics I've read. I've been immensely enjoying this work. 😊
First, the first chapter is just a log, it's not even a chapter. Second, the MC has everything given away and that's not bad, the problem is that he gets everything from the beginning and without any effort. Third, why is God/author going to improve the intelligence of MC, who is one of the most intelligent humans in history? He could give him some other ability that would be useful or improve his strength or speed a little, but instead of that improves the intelligence of one of the most intelligent humans, really? and for what?, so that he then behaves like a conceited idiot who knows everything and shows his abilities, that is, his inhuman intelligence to the ONI, yes of course, as if the ONI did not mutilate people, murder children or exterminate planets just because they think different from them.