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At the time of the review, I read 8 chapters, in general, the story goes fast enough for this type of novel, in general, it is interesting to read, I will not say anything about the characters, since you have read a lot of such novels, but it still deserves 5 stars.
hmmm, the tags say it all... good story development so far. the only problem that you might find is some grammar errors or so that is not something that affects the story too much.
Pushover mc, he left his family behind to grow stronger and get revenge, but he seems to have forgotten about, since he accepted being order around by a crazy woman just because he want to fμ©k her and don't even remember that he have a family who is suffering while he is enjoying himself... truly deplorable
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lazy writing with bad spelling and grammar. plot-holes and shock value twists with 0 foreshadowing setting them up. man, the only good thing about this story is the update speed and mindless fap material.
Nice i like the plot and snu snu scene it has a good flow keep it up [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I've read the first 14 chapters and it pretty decent not that far off from other yandere stories I've read on this site, that is, as long as the chapters keep updating... the writing quality is good but with some minor errors here and there nothing a small grammar check wont fix. character design is a bit on the weak side mainly due to mc's physique, which I hope he can control eventually. The story is still in its early stages so I can t really talk about the Development much, but as long as there isn't too much f**king and explicit scenes that need more than a full chapter to complete, then I'm personally fine with it. On a side note I suggest making the power levels a bit more clear cut and understandable(by that I mean giving us a proper scope of what the essential peak is of a mortal and a bit about at what point are the considered a god or at the level of a god). The current world building is a bit weak as well, we aren't really given much of a good description of certain environments in the story (for example the forest the mc is currently in in chapter 14, I cant really tell what the exact setting is as it s probably a lush forest but it could be alot of other things. I'd say give out small detail of the surrounding like the fauna and flora there. small details bring a big difference to the overall quality of writing). Well thats about it, hope ya have fun writing author-san.
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Very nice. ..something new. ..plot similar to dual cultivation. . but overall great. .Just Hero character stil need some improvement (not entertaining enough but ok so please don't it if you can't improve it) ..Anyway one my best Haram ..i read. .
good so far. the character is actually a good person who debate on what he should do with a problem. not like other mc s that don't care about their parents or home after being reincarnated
keep going author.....your story is so gooood. dont drop this book author.... i will vote for u everyday[img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
The story isn't bad. I like the mc and there isn't any major plot hole rn.the Bg is okay as well......................................................................
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Remarkable, respected writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story Remarkable, respected writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story Remarkable, respected writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story Remarkable, respected writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story
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I've read 20 chapters and the story seems pretty promising so far. The only bad point would be typos but I heard a kind soul is editing the chapters so there shouldn't be more typos in the future.
Thank u author for creating this wonderful novel . I am always here to read or check Ur update thank you very much❤️❤️❤️ Please read it it was a wonderful novel
It was ok at the start but it gradually got interesting. I can see the development of your skill as an author clearly with each passing moment. I am now hooked with your novel. So keep on the good work. God bless you. xD
honestly the story was quite good and fun to read on the early chapter when he's still at the Royal Palace , after he transport out it kinda become boring to read . same with the plot , i genuinely think the earlier chapter is much more interesting I'd be honest if i know this how the story gonna progress i wouldn't have bother reading it which is sad considering this story has genuinely good potential