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good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
It did had a good start but I feel like it's becoming somewhat cliche with just about 30 chapters in. Also the grammar is getting in my way of fully immersing in story.
I've read 20 chapters and the story seems pretty promising so far. The only bad point would be typos but I heard a kind soul is editing the chapters so there shouldn't be more typos in the future.
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Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story
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good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
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Nice i like the plot and the scenes it has a good flow keep it up and reading this story also feels nice i started reading the 1st 10 chapter and man i am inpressed with the story line just the updates are kinda lousy
Just review. It's boring 😑😑...................................................,.... ............................................................................................ ................................... ..............................................................
Thank you for the chapter, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story Thank you for the chapter, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story
Muy buena novela.............................................................................................................................................
honestly the story was quite good and fun to read on the early chapter when he's still at the Royal Palace , after he transport out it kinda become boring to read . same with the plot , i genuinely think the earlier chapter is much more interesting I'd be honest if i know this how the story gonna progress i wouldn't have bother reading it which is sad considering this story has genuinely good potential
The story is really good and the foreshadowing of more powerful entities or higher realms makes it even more exciting. Give it a try then you will realise how good it is. Thanks Author for the superb story
Pushover mc, he left his family behind to grow stronger and get revenge, but he seems to have forgotten about, since he accepted being order around by a crazy woman just because he want to fμ©k her and don't even remember that he have a family who is suffering while he is enjoying himself... truly deplorable
Spoiler de révélationThank u author for creating this wonderful novel . I am always here to read or check Ur update thank you very much❤️❤️❤️ Please read it it was a wonderful novel
I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
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good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
It did had a good start but I feel like it's becoming somewhat cliche with just about 30 chapters in. Also the grammar is getting in my way of fully immersing in story.
I've read 20 chapters and the story seems pretty promising so far. The only bad point would be typos but I heard a kind soul is editing the chapters so there shouldn't be more typos in the future.
🥳 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story Good story I look forward to the continuation of the author's story
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
goooood -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Nice i like the plot and the scenes it has a good flow keep it up and reading this story also feels nice i started reading the 1st 10 chapter and man i am inpressed with the story line just the updates are kinda lousy
Just review. It's boring 😑😑...................................................,.... ............................................................................................ ................................... ..............................................................
Thank you for the chapter, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story Thank you for the chapter, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story
Muy buena novela.............................................................................................................................................
honestly the story was quite good and fun to read on the early chapter when he's still at the Royal Palace , after he transport out it kinda become boring to read . same with the plot , i genuinely think the earlier chapter is much more interesting I'd be honest if i know this how the story gonna progress i wouldn't have bother reading it which is sad considering this story has genuinely good potential
The story is really good and the foreshadowing of more powerful entities or higher realms makes it even more exciting. Give it a try then you will realise how good it is. Thanks Author for the superb story
Pushover mc, he left his family behind to grow stronger and get revenge, but he seems to have forgotten about, since he accepted being order around by a crazy woman just because he want to fμ©k her and don't even remember that he have a family who is suffering while he is enjoying himself... truly deplorable
Spoiler de révélationThank u author for creating this wonderful novel . I am always here to read or check Ur update thank you very much❤️❤️❤️ Please read it it was a wonderful novel
I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter