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Thanks for the quality work. I really enjoyed many aspects of the book, especially the main character. Also, I'm looking forward to seeing his interactions with the characters MCU 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I barely read 10 chapters. if you like reading meaningless, filler dialogs and repetitive explanations, go ahead. I am stopping reading. I am waiting for a healthy critique from those who continue. let me know if the following chapters are worth reading.
The translation and grammar is the biggest thing that is holding this story back. also the pandering of the mc can be lowered to make it more authentic .
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This has to be au because Lord Barron, Strucker dies during the movie avengers age of Ultron, so this has to be in alternative universe
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bro I read like 10-15 chapters and story and character development are going pretty good it made me hooked to the story l the only fault I could find in this story is grammatical mistakes which is holding this story back but it cand be improved and if you fix some errors here and there it will make the story mor entertaining without having correcting mistakes ourselves when reading. Good work and thank you for translation 😊 👍🏻
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Awesome novel. Beginning may feel a little hurried. Definitely recommended read. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
good read but it is also a slowburn at times. mc is likeable but his golden finger doesn't really allow him to be a heroic person. I'd say he is chaotic neutral. xoxo my way or the highway.
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why does say he is a villain its like he is a anti villian/hero because he save certain ppl for his on usre
Buen fin recomendado. La historia está buena el desarrollo no es muy apresurado alemnos hasta donde leí la recomiendo Buen fin recomendado. La historia está buena el desarrollo no es muy apresurado alemnos hasta donde leí la recomiendo
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This story is very good, the idea is creative and it is super well written! and oddly enough I didn't find any flaws or holes in the script! so this story has been a wonderful experience!.... one question who will be the romantic partner?