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Danmachi: the Great Devourer
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A soul is lost wandering the afterlife when it stumbles upon the edge of existance and witnesses the river of reincarnation. Sadly, an unknown hostile entity gives it the boot, sending it for a rollercoaster ride in the river as it is torn apart. An goddess arrives to save the soul in time and stitches it back together again, telling the soul to quickly acquire a falna by any costs. Observe how the soul survives in Orario without conventional magic but with a series of strange skills it obtained from the merger of souls.
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Harem recommendation :Danmachi :Artemis, Athena, Freya, hephaestus, ryuu lion, mikoto yamato hestia, female bell, haruhime, ais, alfia, riveriaFate :artoria (ruler) Morgana Medusa, Jeanne de arc, mordred, scathact, rin tohsaka, minamoto, brynhilder, mashu, Jeanne alter artoria (saber)
It’s good but the mc changes way to fast and his character is weird to the point I can’t understand if he is a battle maniac or a pervert or a shy boy or a guy with anger issues or a romantic guy and another thing is that after every single fight he is heavily injured and has to rest for at least 3 days to 2-3 weeks it’s kinda annoying that every fight is just a series of fight gets heavily injured gets new soul fragment/s to get more power kills enemies falls unconscious that is the extent of the action in this fic and his relationships with women is weird and kinda forced like freya and syr were in the bag just from a couple of words and then the next second the are having sèx it is weird
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The idea is not bad but it needs a lot of polishing and the synopsis needs to be corrected, first of all this is a crossover with destiny, the protagonist has his own fana. The main problems with this story is the protagonist, his story and personality just don't hook you, he is flat and stupid as well as having personality problems.
I can't say I'm the best author ever but my previous works did seem pretty popular. on a side note, I am not a complete expert in the Fate series but I will try to do my research to get the characters accurate while also keeping the world of danmachi correct
Lixo até um lixo e melhor do que essa história pode ter certeza sem erros etc mas e um lixo me dá agonia muita agonia só ler o primeiro capítulo chorei por conseguir ler a até o 10 cap mas continua lixo desculpa autor se fosse só do anime seria tô ele com as memórias etc mas e lixo
Really a good start. I first I didn't thought it was unique but it really was.
Xanok_Malakai Great Fanfic Keep doing a great job You can do this Danmachi fanfic idea directly after Danmachi: the Great Devourer In Danmachi as a Saiyan A soul is reborn into Danmachi as a Saiyan a month before the start of episode one. Now in this new world, he will take everything for himself, including all beautiful women.
so far so good. I'm not the biggest fan of the Fate crossover as people tend to focus too much on the crossover elements than the OG world but so far the Author is handling it well and is not hyper-focusing on the crossover stuff. Keep up the great work
MC é nerfado do nada e aceita isso ... se vc não ligar para isso pode ler, se vc acha isso uma besteira nem perca seu tempo igual eu perdi o meu
The general plot is good and the soul fragments are interesting but my biggest issue is that he lets himself be used by others and lets things happen to him rather than making things happen himself. Raiko even used him for a war game that he didn't even agree too. He could have just dismantled the appolo familia himself. She never even warned him about it and then he has to suffer the consequences of that war game and her killing Appolo while hardly getting any benefits for him or his familia because the prize was spilt between different familia. If you want to know what I mean then read "Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers". This is a protagonist who takes control of his fate rather than letting things happen to him and just reacting to the world.
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why don't you give him rudius grayrat knowledge of magic OR you can also give him Naruto chakra
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the author is good at writing but the story and character design kinda seem to be lacking... like a flat can of soda due to a few things like the MC being a background character with no idea about the world he's in making him seem like a drooling moron with no personality. the author tries to make the MC seem like an interesting character by giving him a devouring skill but that falls flat as well because the MC can't truly take advantage of his skill due to his lack of memories.... linda like giving a monkey a sward expecting him to be able to use it properly lol. the only saving grace is the merging souls give him memories of how to use his new skills. As for adding fate characters, I don't mind them so much it just seems like they don't blend well with the type of world and kinda seem to replace the main cast as a consolation prize so Bell can keep his herem.