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Bell Cranel of Loki Familia
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Synopsis
What if Bell Cranel was part of Loki Familia?
Will he be even stronger? who knows...unless you read this story. This is not your typical Danmachi boring story but actually a good story with based plot and Bell gaining new harem members.
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Might be a decent or even good story here but I couldn't get past the second chapter. the Grammar is horrendous. Spacing is horrible too. it looks very lazy. I would of stuck around in hopes the author would get better as the story proceeded but this author has created a lot of stories and if his grammar still hasn't improved then I have no reason to believe it will later on. Good luck with your ✍.
Chapter 6 review I would say this is a decent story it's a tiny bit Bland but it is just starting. The only thing is if you can get past the missing words it's not too bad it's readable but if things like a sentence like this [Goblin attacked me] instead of [the goblin attack me] gets to you this is not for you.