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Might be a decent or even good story here but I couldn't get past the second chapter. the Grammar is horrendous. Spacing is horrible too. it looks very lazy. I would of stuck around in hopes the author would get better as the story proceeded but this author has created a lot of stories and if his grammar still hasn't improved then I have no reason to believe it will later on. Good luck with your ✍.
Chapter 6 review I would say this is a decent story it's a tiny bit Bland but it is just starting. The only thing is if you can get past the missing words it's not too bad it's readable but if things like a sentence like this [Goblin attacked me] instead of [the goblin attack me] gets to you this is not for you.
Might be a decent or even good story here but I couldn't get past the second chapter. the Grammar is horrendous. Spacing is horrible too. it looks very lazy. I would of stuck around in hopes the author would get better as the story proceeded but this author has created a lot of stories and if his grammar still hasn't improved then I have no reason to believe it will later on. Good luck with your ✍.
Chapter 6 review I would say this is a decent story it's a tiny bit Bland but it is just starting. The only thing is if you can get past the missing words it's not too bad it's readable but if things like a sentence like this [Goblin attacked me] instead of [the goblin attack me] gets to you this is not for you.
Great stroy, please don’t abandoned it!!!