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In a world marked by the invasion and massacre of his village, Thorian, the sole surviving child, harbors a fierce resentment towards the invaders from the Fire Nation. From his adolescence into adulthood, his quest for revenge leads him down a dark path of learning centered on violence. Eventually, he is compelled to gather the survivors to end the war, facing a crucial decision: resign himself to the endless conflict or seek a way out that will halt the bloodshed.
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- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Is it just me or is there some inspiration for this fic, thorian? Thorfinn? Basically the same origin story, dad running from the fighting life, idk but i see the VS inspiration 😭
Some things stayed in line with the original, others didn't. you added some good, kept in some good, but left in a lot of bad, like interactions between characters. Aang and thorian engage once, he reveals he has lightning somehow, avatar kyoshi tries to stop him from doing nothing worse than what the fire nation is still currently doing, and by that time she's firmly against him for some reason. maybe I'm just an idiot, but interactions between characters feels so off, and it doesn't actually seem like anything that happens has a good reason instead of plot needing to move in a certain direction.
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Hey man I love your stories, you don't or listen why I have to say I'm just curious can you do, Kakegurui or classroom of the elites or date a life, the reason why because I haven't seen any good fiction of down, and the reason why I came to you because I like your fanfiction and I think you do pretty good job of the fictional novels, anyway I'm taking up your time you don't have to answer or fulfill my quest, I hope you have a great day and keep up your good work, bye.
One of the best Avatar stories i have ever read , the plot is quite new but very well thought out , and although it was a short story it was better than most long ones ive read.
Muy buena historia de avatar, me gusta como manejas el desarrollo del personaje y que y retrates como funciona la realidad de que en una guerra no reconcilian no,as por unas palabras, pregunta tendrá alguna pareja si es así espero que no pongas a suki sinceramente a alguien como el no sería buena
I love this story, the innocence that Ang's story had is finally over 🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡
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The start kinda threw me off a bit but overall good Ps what I think the mc look’s like starring off the wall
corta pero buena lo importante no es que sea larga sino que tenga desarrollo y un buen final medio apresurado pero fue como avatar realmente
great story as always, keep writing and don’t burn out, and I’ll give it a 5 and go into oblivion and a little more to fill the word count..
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Short novel that I imagined in a weekend, this story is about revenge and I hope you will forgive me if there is a lot of gore. Some parts of the story will not be taken into account, I set something I want to tell and things will move too quickly. Maybe a few 100 story chapters, maybe more.