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A Puppet's Twisted Mind
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I give this a 5/5. I like the story because in most cases of other fanfiction of evil quirk or mutation they either get hated by the parents or thrown away because of their looks.So getting loved by his family is a good change as it is always the same thing for other novels but maybe some aren't... so i hope this can atleast continue
please don't drop this fanfic it's really good and can't what for more chapters again PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE 😭🙏😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
It was decent but then the author gave the mc some random a** power ups that have nothing to do with the Puppet from fnaf.
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Al principio pensé que estaría bueno, pero luego va empeorando .... ... . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .
I don't know what I was thinking Leaving my child behind Now I suffer the curse Knowing now I am blind With all this anger, guilt and sadness Coming to haunt me forever I can't wait for the cliff at the end of the river Is this revenge I am seeking Or seeking someone to avenge me? Stuck in my own paradox I wanna set myself free Maybe I should chase and find Before they'll try to stop it It won't be long before I'll become a puppet It's been so long Since I last have seen my son Lost to this monster To the man behind the slaughter Since you've been gone I've been singing this stupid song So I could ponder The sanity of your mother I wish I lived in the present With the gift of my past mistakes But the future keeps luring in like a pack of snakes Your sweet little eyes Your little smile, is all I remember Those fuzzy memories mess with my temper Justification is killing me But killing isn't justified What happened to my son? I'm terrified It lingers in my mind And the thought keeps on getting bigger I'm sorry, my sweet baby I wish I've been there It's been so long Since I last have seen my son Lost to this monster To the man behind the slaughter Since you've been gone I've been singing this stupid song So I could ponder The sanity of your mother
Charlotte Emily... the one i shouldn't have killed has reincarnated in mha interesting continue to write as i William Afton shall witness your story
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The story is going in a very unique but cool manner in that the mc is the actual puppet born in MHA. It's also amazing that fnaf fanfic that isn't garbage is made so kudos to author.
The idea for the story is good, but I’m not a big fan of multi-main character vibes, so unfortunately not for me. (would recommend for others)
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Story wise, its good, but could use some cleaning and some expansion on details. Less shoehorning in powers as well and too many different "Focus" characters in different areas. It does have a good base to kick off from tho, so have fun Personally, this worm is not a fan. While some "Villian" fics out there are good, this worm prefers a coin where there is no good or evil, just two different sides. While the story does go into the background of the charater, just being "Evil" right off the bat doesn't sit well.
Honestly it was a really good read and this is surprising to say non the least, but even more so that fact that the "quirk" or his physical body slowly corrupts the MC's physiology, this being the only novel having actually use this where a MC becomes a monster say a demon and they aren't affected by it in the slightest. Just stupid authors not wanting to be realistic with their wish fulfilment but other than that writing is well planed and I haven't seen any grammar errors so that's a plus. Needs more updates and I personally didn't like the that girl with a system that chooses to follow the MC around with her system, not sure why it irks me but it does.
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Oh! you're rewriting it! I give a four because it was good before. can't wait to start it again when ther are more chapters
I like the characters and powers but I'm just super confused over what is going on. why are there demons involved . what is the metal and the reason for the rapid change of desire from hero to villain. a few more words to explain the changes in the mc's action. at least explaining the change would be nice since it feels like a lot of information is left out. also isn't he still 2 years old in the current state of his body
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Hello I'm Alice i have a idea you can do i can create alive animatronics? system can create animatronics ?
Ever since the Rewrite this FF just got more boring with the Info Dump. Ik how Author brought the girl so we could enjoy the 2 perspective but it just doesn’t turn me on. I have no idea where this is going but I just hope we get to see more screen time for MC
Please don’t drop. This story is very unique, and is really exciting to read when you drop a new chap!
pretty good it's one of the best fanf inspired fanfiction I've ever read up on till now. I recommend you read at least four chapters until you make your assumption. P.S. It's very original and is pretty well written if you can deal the Japanese at the start, it also has a decent plot twist.
ignore the others this is not a good novel so many things are skipped and make no sense random powers out of no where 🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱