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A journey in black clover
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Synopsis
The story revolves around a boy named Tobias. He was raised by three good bandits and as the latter hit 15, he went out to receive his first Grimoire thus a new journey begins.
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This will be an ‘AU', so there will be some changes, nothing major though.
English is my 4th language in other words it's terrible. I don't recommend anybody to read this novel unless you have nothing to read.
I just want to improve my writing skills.
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The cover is not mine, I just added yuta in this pic, and here is the original pic of yuta https://pin.it/5ldP4hD. If the owner wants me to remove it, I will do it as soon as possible.
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Hello!, I am the author of this book. I don't have enough confidence to state that this novel will be decent, it will be an average(trash) read and I don't recommend anybody to read this unless they have nothing to read.
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I'm unable to offer much in the way of opinion given the single chapter, however, given the four-day lapse, I'm assuming the book has been dropped, yet I shall proceed to give my advice on the issues I’ve found. Numerous places could benefit from a coma. I can spot one with a quick glance. Your writing should illustrate rather than declare through excessive adverb use. Adverbs are commonly too lackadaisical in literary works, especially creative ones. However, that’s just my opinion, and a lot of other authors seemed to agree with it. Author, I hope you don’t actually drop the book and continue to publish more chapters!