HxH: Apex Predator

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Froid_Lumens

HunterXHunter fanfic that's tagged as no-harem? Also as a Zoldyck to top that? Sounds very promising! So far though, there's only 5 chapters, but the storytelling and plot direction is interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters, but for now, I think it's worth a shot.

LV 2

YATOOO

I'm not opposed to the concept of an evil mc, but killing a child without any justification or meaningful purpose In the first chapters is something I cannot tolerate. You could have at least built up to it gradually giving us time to connect with the mc before unveiling their darker side in a moment of moral conflict, perhaps when they are forced to take an innocent life or while in a disturbed mental state, similar to how Gon’s transformation was handled in the Ant arc. That kind of progression would have made it more palatable.

LV 4

The_man_The_myth

Actually kinda shocked to be honest I was expecting garbge after I saw a system and sharingan but it seems like the author knows a lot about the story and is doing the well.

LV 4

Benny_Ben

It is a novel worth reading, i liked it and i would love to read it, if the author update the novel daily. And i think i would like MC more if the author make his personality like gojo satorou, the only guy in the family of assassin with annoying and teasing personality . Like a big brother who like to tease his little siblings and they can't kill him .

LV 5

budhist

HxH with system is risky, add that the system points can only be acquired by killing, the novel would go a downward path. The awesome part of HxH is it's nen system,it would have been better if mc is born with his gifts but no system and mc develop his nen system around his gifts. i don't mind a weak system but system that motivate to kill and an unhinged mc is a bad combination(mc's thought process in beginning chapters and how he say zoldych values corrupted him in a joking way kind of give mc' s character)

LV 4

Humbuub

great so far, but I'm still skeptical what you'd do to make your fic as enjoyable now in the future chapters. You made him OP too fast. You also said the system would barely have any presence, yet you kept writing dialogues between MC & the System.

LV 4

Abdullah_Alghamdi_9810

This has great potential to be a five star Fanfic , I mean the mc is in HXH as the oldest zoldych child and the fanfic is tagged as villain and no harem , those are the two things that always brings stories crashing down so without them I see great to potential for it to succeed 👍 I wish for the author to be successful , because more HXH content is always welcome by me .

LV 14

Voidz_Zero

Story is solid, im enjoying it very much. Unfortunately, many of the HxH fics here are sub par at best, it’s very unfortunate to say the least. And yet, every now and then I come across a good one, like this one. Grammar is (chiefs kiss) All good, nearly no mistakes, the ones I’ve found were all mere minor ones that only experienced readers could find. I truly enjoy reading this, and I truly hope for it to continue moving forward.

LV 4

Mongkikiii

really good novel with op mc, please dont drop this author

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Error000000

This book is amazing, like I don’t even know what to say 😭 I’m crying because I’m caught up with the chapters and I just need more 🤣 plz more , from the characters to the fight , yes the conversation might take some time but overall it’s the best HXH fanfic I have ever read ,

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Howard_Rolle_3491

This is amazing marry me rn my expectations were not high at all I thought this was going to be terrible honestly but but I was proven wrong gladly this is amazing

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DaoistTFR2PB

Muito bom ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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LV 14

EarthlyNatureLover

It's great Author-san, please don't die☺️.

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ponysha

Very interesting ........................................................................................................................................................................

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TiuLuh

Parece promissor. Mesmo que alguns aspectos da personalidade do protagonista sejam meio estranhos, acho que ser estranho em HxH é normal. Rodízio Califórnia 💮 Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮Rodízio Califórnia 💮

LV 5

TheReadingGuy

5/5, this is GOLD again.. another GOLD that I found! ❤️