Skyrim System In Westeros

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Naigelton

its a weird ass story... our mc i reincarnated so i understand that he is more mature and all but his twin brother who is normal with a bit off magic is as smart or atleast what it seems like a grown ass person lol... the mc teaches magic to him when he is 3 years old .. this make no sense .. there is tons of wtf moments in this story especially in the " child " arc b4 he is ten years old .. like in one discussion he have with ashara he start cursing ned for making a child with ashara but not taking responsibility and keeps cursing the shit out of him then ashara tells him to stop then he starts to talk softly to her explaining that ned had no choice to do what he did .. "like wtf dude ?" you got split personality or something ? , 2 seconds b4 you cursed the living shit out off him ... other "wtf" times he has with the peeps in dorne he got beaten up by the 3 snake girls and princess arianna somehow while having stats equal to that of a grown man + magic strength while the oldest of them are 9 or 10 then afterwards he shouts at them then gives them oranges then they make up .. like what the actually fuck ? was the author high while writing this shit or what ? ... this works as a reading material when you have absolutely nothing else to read in the middle of night when sleep escapes you .. i vould never read even 1 chapter of this if i had anything else to read or it be day time .. sorry author but the chapters b4 he turned 10 and went to kings landing again were pure shit .. you should re write it cuz most people will drop it b4 they come to kingslanding again

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Nexluz

Absolutely garbage, 3 year old youngest son who teaches renly magic, still 3 years old out here talking like a grown ass man

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Shalini_Mishra_6542

I, for one am not someone who trash talks and have only given bad review to one NTR novel but this shit is garbage . Here's why you shouldn't read it: He got plumuled and bloodied by for kids when he has adults strength , insted of smashing there teeths, he teaches them new sword style . Made himself and Renly hostages of Dorn when war could have been won in any other way. Married a basterd who is a certified wh#re in the show and made Renly suffer the same fate. They humiliation and torture they inflicted on him is another matter . Could have saved Elia easily , All it took was one letter of warning to Twyn and he won't dare defy Roberts request . And he would have saved himself from humiliation . Let Robert marry Cersie and now there is a Bastard Joffrey roaming the Red keep like a prince. While he has a potential assassin as his wife. who will certainly cheat on him even before they are fully married .

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Piggy

how is a fanfic so high on the rankings so trash. gets beaten up by 4 little girls when he has the strength of a grown men continues to let them beat him bloody and he takes it like a little bitch.

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Tai_Fei

I've read novels so bad they were good, but this is just "TF?". .................. ............................. ................... ..................... .......................... ..........

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Daoist3FFpqx

Zzz. I Dont know how this Thing is in the rankings, if you appreciate your time dont read this trash

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NeoCloud

the story fails to interest the reader, lacks impact, flow and plot. there are too many holes in the story and are forced. there is too many inconsistent development without any support or reason.

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Humbuub

should've read the reviews before wasting my time.

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KazuT13_ArtyFJinx

In all honesty it's not... great. The idea was interesting, but story development and character designs? It was... not the best. Writing Quality... they made mistakes with the names. It was just confusing, especially the quickness of trust between the brothers, like why didn't they question the MC knowledge??? Like wtf would a 2-5 year old learn about... M(spoiler) and why would they believe him? Why the hell would they send their kid brothers to be a... H(spoiler), and why the hell would the other stormland lords not protest to that.

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ImaginationGalaxy

I have reached chapter 20, and all I can say is that other readers have had their minds rotted by trash fanfics. Yes there are some parts of this story that are slow, or could be better, but that’s what makes it shine! Not everything is 100% perfect, and it’s dumb to expect it to be. Going to Dorne and the stuff that happened there, made people whiny when if anything it greatly showed that there would be some uniqueness to the story. The clock part and agricultural stuff was completely fine with me too. A lot of readers are upset he isn’t Scrooge McDuck, not realizing that some things are greater than coin pinching. One critique I do have, is that the Skyrim system doesn’t fully port well into ASOIAF. Like Lockpicking is hardly ever going to have a use, when Medicine or Unhanded could be amazing skills to have.

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N1CK999

its a nice novel ................................................................ .. .................................................................

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kyl_3614

Yo chapter 33 is missing can you fix that please.☹️☹️☹️

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DarthMairon

Again I agree with the reviews the MC is medically speaking suffering some kind of retardation from a dumb as plan of giving himself and his twin over as hostages to Dorne to him arranging a betrothal to a fucking Dornish bastard born to a whore from Volantis and somehow seeing that as a “fair” deal ignoring how such a stupid move would basically make him and the whole Baratheon house the laughing stock of the Kingdoms. This is the worst kind of shit I’ve seen in a while. Don’t waste your time.

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Newnoob

I believe you have great potential author. Every author have their ups and downs. So don't give up. And I hope you will create a top level fic one day. Hope to see you one day achieve it. And btw if you ever need potential ideas for a GOT fic knock on this comment, I'll try my best to give you a creative idea.

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SAERDSDGVDFGHD

I didn't have high expectations, but they were shattered anyway. I just wanted to read nice story in westeros. Instead we got weird story that doesn't make sense. Lets list problems: 1. [MC is doormat]. 1a)He proposes by himself to be betrothed to low value girl when he is 3 years old. Even tho there is Denearys out there. 1b)he refuses rewards for his work, every other member of house Baratheon gets fief like stormlands or dragostone, he gets small town. 1c) he shares his knowledge with everybody, including knowledge of value of valyrian steel, and of course value of valyrian steel goes up, because everybody starts to hoard it and he has difficulties to buy it (duh). I have read over 30 chapters and mc never does anything that would benefit himself. 2. [the story is super heavy in pointless exposition]. I like exposition, i think many authors should add exposition to their stories. Exposition that explains what is going on is very good. I hate pointless dialogs and banter. Unfortunately author uses only exposition and describes things that are simply boring. As we read we just learn what mc did (and he doesn't do much, he allows story to go without changing anything) its extremely unsatisfying.

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Febfew

Rewrite and analyze everything, otherwise someone will steal your idea and still make money from it. Don't be foolish, don't be a stepping stone for others so willingly while being ignored.

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Falen420

It's not a Skyrim system, the Author keeps adding restrictions chapter after chapter. The story also feels weird to read because the author doesn't seem to have a grasp on the lore of Asoiaf and doesn't seem to have done any research to fix this gaping flaw when trying to write a fanfic about it.

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SomeLordsBastard

I don't know why everyone is trashing this novel. Have your read other things on webnovel? Most of it is AI assisted, canon following garbage.

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BrandPatriarch

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GAmer_Fd

raw? .