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UthredofBebbanburg

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UthredofBebbanburg
UthredofBebbanburg
4 hours ago
Replied to L0rds2278

That’s true as long as you have a good resource and some political capital the Republic is corrupt enough not to care. However I do have to ask isn’t that population a little bit low?? Unless you meant 117 million humans but even then planets should have at least billions

117 Million in population, 80% Vratix, the native spieces, 20% humans. The Vratix was a less evolved species and was slave labour.

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UthredofBebbanburg
UthredofBebbanburg
8 hours ago
Replied to Lunacia_Yujin

Sure I get that but you do see how it diminishes him in their eyes as well as the realms right? Besides if you give them that “hope” then that isn’t going to be broken easily. Especially when it will make it into everyones ears.

UthredofBebbanburg
UthredofBebbanburg
8 hours ago
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That would also let him know if there is any difference in completely draining a Targaryen. Maybe that gives him more of a boost if he drains the “soul” or something

UthredofBebbanburg
UthredofBebbanburg
8 hours ago
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Ok now I’m not liking this Drakken is getting cut too easily while also making his words mean shit. He said his word was law and that Aemon was going to die yet he just let him go. I think that he should’ve forced his word to become truth by fully draining Aemon in front of them.

UthredofBebbanburg
UthredofBebbanburg
8 hours ago
Commented

Owww COME ON DUDE!! You’re just making Drakes too shit now. He’s getting cut by everyone…

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Then, without wasting time, Aemon hit Drakken with a riposte, piercing his own shoulder. The god of war seemed unfazed, looking at the blade that was impaling his left shoulder. 

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UthredofBebbanburg
UthredofBebbanburg
8 hours ago
Commented

Heyy no problem I do think that you should “rebalance” the prizes while keeping in mind not only the “Risk/Reward” ratio as well as the death possibility but also the difference between first place and second place should be WAY more significant. For example if first place gets and skill and something else second place doesn’t get the skill (which would be the best prize) but gets something less valuable.

I just want to quickly thank everyone who has kept up with the book. I also want to apologise for the subpar chapter no matter how much I rewrote or edited it. It never felt right to me and I didn't want to delay posting it. I may update it if I find the time to rework it. 

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UthredofBebbanburg
UthredofBebbanburg
8 hours ago
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I mean you could also just say something along the lines of “After a loser is clear life or death will be up to the Tower Master” kind of like deciding if he gave a worthy show or not. This would help build his image up as a “God” or “Master” of a realm like the Tower

Using magic I made my voice heard on every floor that had climbers. "Attention tower climbers. I am the Tower Master, and I want to thank you all. For more than a year now people have been exploring the tower at their own speed, but this is not the point of the tower. Playing it safe does not get you to the top, for this reason I have an event for you" I paused to let the words sink in "In four days there will be a tournament between all levels of climbers, everyone who participates will get some kind of reward. In this tournament there are only two rules, no killing and no torture. Though I do understand that accidents can happen. It will take place of the first floor until then passage past the first floor does not require beating the boss monster and all monsters on the floor will disappear. I hope to see you there" 

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UthredofBebbanburg
UthredofBebbanburg
8 hours ago
Commented

I mean for those rewards you might as well just enable killing man. At least for the higher lever brackets I say you’re still holding the players hand too much. You need to get them to value the chances more instead of just making everything seem risk free

Using magic I made my voice heard on every floor that had climbers. "Attention tower climbers. I am the Tower Master, and I want to thank you all. For more than a year now people have been exploring the tower at their own speed, but this is not the point of the tower. Playing it safe does not get you to the top, for this reason I have an event for you" I paused to let the words sink in "In four days there will be a tournament between all levels of climbers, everyone who participates will get some kind of reward. In this tournament there are only two rules, no killing and no torture. Though I do understand that accidents can happen. It will take place of the first floor until then passage past the first floor does not require beating the boss monster and all monsters on the floor will disappear. I hope to see you there" 

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UthredofBebbanburg
8 hours ago
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Why even reward anything lower than 3rd place?? IMO most second and third place prizes are actually incredibly over rewarded as it is.

Anything lower than third place got some random piece of equipment or some general amount of XP. 

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UthredofBebbanburg
10 hours ago
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Heeyy that’s good to know but still I don’t like the Zelda set up for a story. So maybe you can do something else

Hello readers, I just want to address my previous statement about the legend of Zelda story. I would not be working on it at the same time as this story, it would most definitely be after this story is finished or I at least have all the chapter rough drafts done. My personal schedule of work, family, and other things do not permit me the time to work on more than one story at a time. But this story does have a planned end, I think having a planned end is important in any story otherwise it ends up dragging on too long. I may write past the planned end, but it would become secondary to a new story. 

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