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Jagami28

Honsetly. I would have given this work 1 star... But this is ,my work... so you know, 5 stars)) I am truly the one shameless author here. Can do nothing about this)

8d
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Zancrowe

Buenísimo comienzo de historia, espero que puedas seguir con este trabajo hasta que le des un final, siga con el buen trabajo autor, espero que pueda haber un buen romance, porque eso siempre le agrega sabor a una historia

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dipk_xd

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tweaked_genesis

Its still in its early stages but i can tell that the author is cooking something amazing here. Pls do not give up this fanfic, this is one of the only arcane fanfic that has a good plot and story.

2d
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Fajar_Muhammad_8473

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Mad_Governor

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Giorgi_Kakaladze

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grimtide

I'm really looking forward to this story

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3d
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Filip_Ivic

I like it so far can't wait for the system and how will it change the path the story is following there aren't any arcane fic but still i tnik it quite good for somebody ho is trying to write a story

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Carson_Lodahl

Interesting idea.

7d
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Jagami28

Honsetly. I would have given this work 1 star... But this is ,my work... so you know, 5 stars)) I am truly the one shameless author here. Can do nothing about this)

8d
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Zancrowe

Buenísimo comienzo de historia, espero que puedas seguir con este trabajo hasta que le des un final, siga con el buen trabajo autor, espero que pueda haber un buen romance, porque eso siempre le agrega sabor a una historia

3h
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dipk_xd

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2d
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tweaked_genesis

Its still in its early stages but i can tell that the author is cooking something amazing here. Pls do not give up this fanfic, this is one of the only arcane fanfic that has a good plot and story.

2d
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Fajar_Muhammad_8473

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2d
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Mad_Governor

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Darith_Sky

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Giorgi_Kakaladze

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grimtide

I'm really looking forward to this story

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3d
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Filip_Ivic

I like it so far can't wait for the system and how will it change the path the story is following there aren't any arcane fic but still i tnik it quite good for somebody ho is trying to write a story

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5d
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Carson_Lodahl

Interesting idea.

7d
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