It's translation my work from Russian. Usually Russian rules of dialogues in texts is like this: - I ate my food, - said Viktor, shaking his head approvingly. - But I need more.
Every word in Russian has a gender. Absolutely every word, so there a lot of grammar mistakes because of gender after translating text with translator. For example "hand" in Russian has female gender
"This can't be true. This can't be..." - he repeated mentally, but the voice in his head, like an echo, was adamant. And again his consciousness was consumed by pain, not allowing himself to be distracted by anything else. - "I hope now I wake up in my bed and go about my business." - he hid his hope. He just needed to wake up. His gaze fell on the palm of his hand. She reached out to pinch the forearm of his other hand. It hurt, but for some reason the dream didn't seem to be ending. He did the same thing a few more times, but to no avail.
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It is not infinite. There are possibility to hide in inventory only 50 items
"We need to cover our tracks," he decided. Sirion stood up, picked up one of the things he'd created earlier, and wondered how best to hide his achievements. He quickly assessed his room: a bed, a closet, a couple of old boxes.
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Ok. during re-reading of this chapter and translating it i felt like a made some plot mistakes with the the system in this chapter, so i had to rewrite this part. Maybe next chapter tomorrow will take a little bit longer to publish because i need to rewrite something in it,
No, but russian is 2nd language
"Biba and Boba, may I inquire about your visit with this one?" he nodded his chin dismissively towards Sirion.
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Mc doesn't know about this. He didi t even fully finished season 1 and doesn't know lore very much. Only scene with of court in Arcane was with Jayce because he worked with magic, so he made assumptions
"It... it was just like magic," he thought with a slight shock. Change of plans, he had to be extremely careful. The system had laid down traditional methods of creating things during engineering. If he had time, he should create things in the traditional way and look for tools that would help in creation. It would be nice to work with his hands as well. Only with a minimum amount of time and in a closed area like this room could he think about such a quick production of the material. If Piltover caught him, they would consider him a sorcerer and put him in prison, judging by the series, they did not like magic. If these abilities were noticed in Zaun, it was easy to guess what would happen. Finn would begin to fully exploit his abilities. And if other crime lords and Chem-barons found out about his abilities, they would try to either eliminate him or lure him to their side. He had to be extremely careful.
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Magic isn't illegal in Piltover, but work with it is, as it was shown in Arcane. They wanted to exclude Jayce not only because of explosion in his apartment. But also because of dangers of work with magic itself. Maybe being magician from other region visiting Piltover wouldn't be illegal, but being citizen of Piltover or Zaun might be... well before the creation of Hex tech
Not 120 chapters, 120 pages in Word
Ну пока можете поставить 5 звезд здесь в рецензии, и закидать пауэр стоунами)
I understand this, but I made some changes for plot. Didn't want this ff to be 100% Arcane canonically
Arcane: Broken Mechanism
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