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i really enjoyed it the writing is better, The story is good,t the characters are good but you have to update more chapters
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
please update I really love the story could you please give 2 chapters per upload
Anyone have a raw source that is complete? The one on Faloo, which is the only raw I could find of this, stops at chapter 48 and becomes premium. I'm curious if this translator actually has access to the full story or if he'll run into a roadblock there.
I don't know why there are bad reviews here, but I really enjoyed reading, I recommend. Continue and don't stop!)) [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
It tastes like mtl without edition, you know the usual snake shield stuff and desperate virus. lol MC switch his gear from being law abiding citizen into a killer so fast that I wonder if he's always been a psycho. Everything else is fine for now.
Me pareció interesante, pero encuentro poco coherente las reacciones del protagonista, su forma de actuar o pensar no coincide con la situación en la que se encuentran en los primeros capítulos, se adapto demasiado rápido y sentí que era poco natural, tal vez algunos crean que me equivoque, pero creo que estos requieren un poco de edición.
....................................................... Cool, I hope you continue writing this story.................................................
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The translation on this is bad, even with the bad translation it would be a bad read as it has all the cliché of bad Chinese fanfiction. i would not read this.
i really enjoyed it the writing is better, The story is good,t the characters are good but you have to update more chapters
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
please update I really love the story could you please give 2 chapters per upload
Anyone have a raw source that is complete? The one on Faloo, which is the only raw I could find of this, stops at chapter 48 and becomes premium. I'm curious if this translator actually has access to the full story or if he'll run into a roadblock there.
I don't know why there are bad reviews here, but I really enjoyed reading, I recommend. Continue and don't stop!)) [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
It tastes like mtl without edition, you know the usual snake shield stuff and desperate virus. lol MC switch his gear from being law abiding citizen into a killer so fast that I wonder if he's always been a psycho. Everything else is fine for now.
Me pareció interesante, pero encuentro poco coherente las reacciones del protagonista, su forma de actuar o pensar no coincide con la situación en la que se encuentran en los primeros capítulos, se adapto demasiado rápido y sentí que era poco natural, tal vez algunos crean que me equivoque, pero creo que estos requieren un poco de edición.
....................................................... Cool, I hope you continue writing this story.................................................
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The translation on this is bad, even with the bad translation it would be a bad read as it has all the cliché of bad Chinese fanfiction. i would not read this.