so the chapter was good I would live for it to be a little long in the chapters in the future please make the fight scenes longer and more detailed more sword play as well he is a master martial artist emphasize that. The overall writing was no good no grammatical mistakes. I just hope for longer chapters with better fight scenes 5 stars
ch 0 3 Khalasar fight
Book&Literature · DaoistqZxYMH
love it just please do 2 chapters a day I will suppo
ch 0 1 Rebirth
Anime & Comics · IDB
hi I really love this fiction just continue to update daily and be consistent please this has the potential to be one of the best one piece fics
Ce livre a été supprimé.
hi live the first chapter please make it in the mcu universe
ch 0 2 Chapter 1
Movies · Ash_D_Born
I really appreciate the comments it helps to further your reading experience if there is anything you see that is wrong or of you want me to add an element to the fic please send me a message
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Blur
Anime & Comics · celestialshadows1
thank you very much for sticking with me and supporting this fic
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Blur
Anime & Comics · celestialshadows1
as always thank you for your review and support it is much appreciated
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: Fool you fool
Anime & Comics · celestialshadows1
amazing book please continue to update it i love rhe premise pf the work
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Anime & Comics · DZeref887