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The novel looks great so far and I hope you continue writing it instead of dropping it halfway through.
while the story is very enticing and is very thorough with the world it takes place in. I think there should be some clarification on the MC's physical appearance and what separates her people from humans.
This novel presents a captivating story of fantasy and adventure, where a millennia-old peace is threatened by a new darkness. The conflict and separation of the twin sisters Siren and Saga bring a narrative rich in emotion, revenge, and redemption. The promise of romance, war, and intense battles promises to engage the reader in a plot where the fate of the kingdom is at stake. The presence of mature themes such as violence and situations of risk adds depth and complexity to the narrative, making it attractive to fans of the genre.
It's quite an interesting book and kept me on my toes, there's both humour and magic.
The novel looks great so far and I hope you continue writing it instead of dropping it halfway through.
while the story is very enticing and is very thorough with the world it takes place in. I think there should be some clarification on the MC's physical appearance and what separates her people from humans.
This novel presents a captivating story of fantasy and adventure, where a millennia-old peace is threatened by a new darkness. The conflict and separation of the twin sisters Siren and Saga bring a narrative rich in emotion, revenge, and redemption. The promise of romance, war, and intense battles promises to engage the reader in a plot where the fate of the kingdom is at stake. The presence of mature themes such as violence and situations of risk adds depth and complexity to the narrative, making it attractive to fans of the genre.
It's quite an interesting book and kept me on my toes, there's both humour and magic.
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