Kurt_Ulmschneider

pretty standard returned to the past story. we'll written/translated though.

it is written well enough. just not my cup of tea

The grammar is good. However, there may be an issue with the translation as the central gimic of the story being a timeless archer referred to as they is easily mixed up with the villages they.

it's well written at a gramatical level at least. the story does have some characters not acting in a way human beings would.

this is a genuinely good story with art a cut above the AI generated crap that is on this site all too often.