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a good story , from the beginning the author introduces some nice way of system settings different from 90% of system based fanfic.
An amazing novel.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good storytelling and updates fast enough for me, but it concludes harry potter to fast, it would be nice to see more of the family that adopted him.
The story itself is just a si where except demonslayer nothing is changed, at the one piece arc and am thinking of dropping, he is apparently a good swordsman but never fights. Honestly if you have anything else to read I would not recommend this glorified diary
Very good novel .........................................................................................................................................................................
with how much he brings up how Indian he is it makes me feel like you can just replace it with Chinese and you'd have an Chinese novel
Keep it up man. It's good not many people write this kind of good stuff so please keep it up and try to write some new fanfiction, and try to make it more lively. Not gonna lie it's look like ai written so add some more direct conversation between characters and add some romance not harem please. It will ruin this story.
I have ideas but cant write dialogue and drama all i have is script of 100 words but saw how all the people are releasing chapter by chapters got shocked but now i know jai GPT
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a good story , from the beginning the author introduces some nice way of system settings different from 90% of system based fanfic.
An amazing novel.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good storytelling and updates fast enough for me, but it concludes harry potter to fast, it would be nice to see more of the family that adopted him.
The story itself is just a si where except demonslayer nothing is changed, at the one piece arc and am thinking of dropping, he is apparently a good swordsman but never fights. Honestly if you have anything else to read I would not recommend this glorified diary
Very good novel .........................................................................................................................................................................
with how much he brings up how Indian he is it makes me feel like you can just replace it with Chinese and you'd have an Chinese novel
Keep it up man. It's good not many people write this kind of good stuff so please keep it up and try to write some new fanfiction, and try to make it more lively. Not gonna lie it's look like ai written so add some more direct conversation between characters and add some romance not harem please. It will ruin this story.
I have ideas but cant write dialogue and drama all i have is script of 100 words but saw how all the people are releasing chapter by chapters got shocked but now i know jai GPT
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