Ghost: The Legacy of a Legend

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Bersrkr

Would be really good if you used less AI, the repetition is grating when you've read 20 chapters that all essentially start and end the same way.

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KingGeorgeUK

One of the best story's I have read while there was some repetition in the writing I hope you do another story but with Harry being a royal wizard or spying on the wizarding world mi5 or with a mix over of being a kid and helping law enforcement like ncis as a teen consultant that could be interesting and funny

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Sagb93

This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. keep it up

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RoadRoller

Excellent stuff, keep it up! The combination of slice of life/action, for lack of a better wording, is really interesting.

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lupex034

give me MMMOOOOORREEE

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Dilheaven

Very good novel. Must read for everyone.esoecially about missions and goodness about charar ter highlighting their goodness and storyline of mission and journey towards goals is inspiring.

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mountain_man194

more! __________________________________

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999123bc

I think you should clarify in the synopsis that though this is a harry potter story, he lost his magic at the start and therefore doesn't have magic. Because the idea of harry being in the military (SAS and stuff) is a good idea, but if you take away his magic then it's just a soldier. Personally taking away his magic just ruins it for me. I do have to say i haven't really read it, i started but just stopped because i really didn't like harry potter without magic. so if im wrong and he gets his magic back or something please let me know.