Great story, keep it up! .............................................................................................................
Enjoying the story. and it's obvious (to me at least) that this isn't chinese mtl story. keep it up
how does he have 1 owl that's actually a moon owl named silverwing, and suddenly he has silverwing and another normal owl that he calls hedwig? doesn't make sense, if you said he bought 2 owl's one of them being a moon owl then sure but this makes reading it weird and difficult. what is also annoying to me when reading this is that harry supposedly is looking into what school to go to but you keep making it sound like he's already decided on hogwarts. i personally think you shouldn't make it look like it's already been decided even if you have already decided it, harry hasn't decided yet.
I think i remember reading somewhere that this author steals all his work and passes it off as his own without permission form multiple authors. I dont remember where i read it but i do remember i checked it and when i found out it was true reported the author to webnovel. I do remember it said he had like 2 accounts that he does this on but i dont remember the name from the other account.
Ce livre a été supprimé.
I think you should clarify in the synopsis that though this is a harry potter story, he lost his magic at the start and therefore doesn't have magic. Because the idea of harry being in the military (SAS and stuff) is a good idea, but if you take away his magic then it's just a soldier. Personally taking away his magic just ruins it for me. I do have to say i haven't really read it, i started but just stopped because i really didn't like harry potter without magic. so if im wrong and he gets his magic back or something please let me know.
Great story, please update more. ....................................................................................................
Pretty sure this is just a copy from The empire of New Valyria by LuciferKurosaki. It has like 40 chapters already at the archiveofourown site
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