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"Hi everyone! I’m the author, and I apologize for not replying to comments over the past few days as I’ve been quite busy. I would greatly appreciate any suggestions or feedback you have, as this is my first fanfic and I’m still learning. Your support means a lot to me, so please feel free to point out any mistakes or areas for improvement!"
Good pokemon fic! I can see that the fic has a lot of potential while I was reading it, but it's really the creativity of the author that limits the story. I wish the author can take heed to comments and advice since there's currently little to no author-reader interactions in this fic, which I think is very important in the process of creating an amazing fanfic.
Thanks for the wonderful novel it is really awesome to read and fun to read the interaction between all characters and hm hm it's my fav Pokemon so yeah 5 star
Wonderful start. Very excited hope to see the same quality going forward. I wonder the adventures in store for our intrepid protagonist.
Ist Seher spannend und gut ausgewogen bin sehr gestand wie es weiter geht und nich hoffe es nich wie andere Geschichten von einmal zu OP weiter so
"Hi everyone! I’m the author, and I apologize for not replying to comments over the past few days as I’ve been quite busy. I would greatly appreciate any suggestions or feedback you have, as this is my first fanfic and I’m still learning. Your support means a lot to me, so please feel free to point out any mistakes or areas for improvement!"
Good pokemon fic! I can see that the fic has a lot of potential while I was reading it, but it's really the creativity of the author that limits the story. I wish the author can take heed to comments and advice since there's currently little to no author-reader interactions in this fic, which I think is very important in the process of creating an amazing fanfic.
Thanks for the wonderful novel it is really awesome to read and fun to read the interaction between all characters and hm hm it's my fav Pokemon so yeah 5 star
Wonderful start. Very excited hope to see the same quality going forward. I wonder the adventures in store for our intrepid protagonist.
Ist Seher spannend und gut ausgewogen bin sehr gestand wie es weiter geht und nich hoffe es nich wie andere Geschichten von einmal zu OP weiter so