Rinchan7

Rinchan7

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Rinchan7
Rinchan7
10 hours ago
Posted

Good pokemon fic! I can see that the fic has a lot of potential while I was reading it, but it's really the creativity of the author that limits the story. I wish the author can take heed to comments and advice since there's currently little to no author-reader interactions in this fic, which I think is very important in the process of creating an amazing fanfic.

Rinchan7
Rinchan7
10 hours ago
Commented

shouldn't Caterpie already be a Butterfree at this level?

Rinchan7
Rinchan7
10 hours ago
Replied to Rinchan7

nor*

Ash chuckled and shook his head. "You can sleep in my tent, Misty. It's got plenty of space. No point in risking it with all those bugs around."

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Anime & Comics · sssachin098

Rinchan7
Rinchan7
10 hours ago
Replied to

he wouldn't*

Ash chuckled and shook his head. "You can sleep in my tent, Misty. It's got plenty of space. No point in risking it with all those bugs around."

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Anime & Comics · sssachin098

Rinchan7
Rinchan7
10 hours ago
Replied to Rinchan7

then be would have any excuse not explanations about where he got it, damn. didn't thought about that

Ash chuckled and shook his head. "You can sleep in my tent, Misty. It's got plenty of space. No point in risking it with all those bugs around."

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Anime & Comics · sssachin098

Rinchan7
Rinchan7
10 hours ago
Commented

Since he has a rotom dex, won't it be more like a companion? I honestly wish to see more interactions with rotom like Sun and Moon, would be cool to see everyone's reaction to Rotom Dex too.

Ash chuckled and shook his head. "You can sleep in my tent, Misty. It's got plenty of space. No point in risking it with all those bugs around."

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Anime & Comics · sssachin098

Rinchan7
Rinchan7
10 hours ago
Commented

ain't this just STAB

Hidden Ability:Adaptability (Increases the effectiveness of same-type moves)

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Anime & Comics · sssachin098

Rinchan7
Rinchan7
10 hours ago
Commented

way too easy, I wish there's more of a challenge for ash. no way he found a shiny Pokemon the moment he arrived just because he got the news of it

He crouched by the water's edge, scanning the surface for any signs of movement. Suddenly, the water rippled, and a gleaming, golden figure emerged—a shiny Magikarp!

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Anime & Comics · sssachin098

Rinchan7
Rinchan7
10 hours ago
Replied to Aether_Dragonite

Misty's full name is Misty Waterflower from what I have read in fics but Brock is always just called Brock.

Misty smiled gratefully as she took his hand. "I'm Misty, from Cerulean City. I was just passing through... until my bike got caught, and I fell in the river."

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Reincarnated as Ash: A Pokémon Tale

Anime & Comics · sssachin098

Rinchan7
Rinchan7
11 hours ago
Replied to Aether_Dragonite

power of viridian allows it's user to heal pokemon and talk to them I believe