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This story is like a real movie or drama and interaction btw characters are smooth.. so yeah best slow romance + character building + word building this is op 😁
love all the characters in this novel, Sui and Erina's relationship feels incredibly natural. It's been a joy to watch it unfold. This story is 100% worth the read. Homie also uploads like crazy on a consistent basis!
good story. I hope for more chapters. End of complete review with points to meet the number of characters...................................
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Я очень благодарен автору за это прекрасное произведение (на момент 197 глав). Медленная и в тоже время быстрая романтическая история, постоянные мини проблемы, и отлично выбранные персонажи делают её не забываемой. Единственное, что я заметил не так, это про количество языков бога, он есть у Эрины и Суи, а также у матери Эрины, Маны, кого автор и забыл посчитать. Но это не беда. История реально замечательная! С нетерпением жду ещё глав!
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This book is a GREAT Food wars fanfic, the settings are great, the crossovers are great, and the food wars aspect itself is one of the best in Webnovel. There’s just one thing that I hate in this book. The MC is a bastard. Sure, it might be hypocritical of me to hate those kind of MC since I like the harem genre. But, just reading how the MC is havin an affair with two other girls and the last one is literally by r@p3? In my opinion, the romance aspect in this book is good. Very even, but the progression is sometimes forced and similar to those Chinese novel where it’s MC can’t keep his weiner in check and pretty much turns into a gigolo while stil saying “I cant leave (main girl) since I love her. But I still love you”. Hate those kind of romance tbh. I rather have brainrot kind of harem then this. Overall: GREAT STORY if you’re searching for Food Wars fanfic. But don’t expect much on the romance part. It’s all my opinion, if you disagree then it’s fine. Thank you
Based on one of my favorite underrated anime 'Food Wars' containing the perfect balance of mouth watering food and ero visuals. Great expectations from it, hope author doesn't disappoint.
Love it!! Love it!! Love it!!! 😍😍😍 This is one of the best (cooking & slice of life) fanfiction!!! 👍👍 It have a very great plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like this kind of story (cooking & slice of life) where MC get system which improve his cooking skill little by little when he done his quest/mission.. MC/Sui system also give him an change to buy more fantasy ingredient which he already get first from mission/quest.. I think you should give him more fantasy recipe, he only have 5 for now?? I like so much MC/Sui interaction with others (Erina, Soma, Polaris dorm people, etc).. But I think you should give him more interactions in his original world people (Luna, his Rep Class, Utaha, etc), you don't forget that he still highschooler in his original world don't you author?? You make him so busy in Totsuki world, than he only back to his world to open his Snack Bar and sleep, than back to Totsuki world.. And why he don't go to 2nd world?? I think it's still ok if Tohru still with Kobayashi, he can do the 2nd mission by get fantasy ingredients from 2nd world.. He can befriend Tohru, Kobayashi, etc with his cooking skill.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍
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I don't review like ever but this one uhh.. ok, so the anime characters are well portrayed, quality is great, heck even the system is great. the character of the mc is best described a weirdo and one that is in no way likable. I read some reviews saying it's a translation so you will basically have to bear a Chinese protagonist thinking it's perfectly normal to S.A. a girl. I have read a LOT of MTLs and can cope with most the mcs with ease but this one I'd suggest anyone to pass. However if you've become immune to this poison then I can't say much. Well, hope this review helps prevent some casualitis
If you switch off your brain to avoid reasoning out its plot errors, it's not so bad, because it has forced plot errors that are a bit silly.
it is an enjoyable read for me. i just wonder when will MC start explaining about his ability to erina, not everything but the world traveler part and what it is really means. i think it's necessary progress for the relationship and the novel just gloss it over.
the pacing is a bit slow and chapters are short other than that it's pretty good
Amazing fanfic. One of the quickest authors to update massive chunks of chapters without a decrease in quality!! I highly recommend reading.
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Its good fanfic, good work for you author. If you seek comedy and SoL genre, you can try this novel, there is not fight scene till now, dunno in future. SNS as base my point is, its good and i recommend you to read it
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idk what it is but story seems to be going downhill for me, i enjoyed it alot more for the earlier chapters but with the recent additions its kinda turning me away from reading the story, will update after i read more chapters
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Honestly not a huge fan of food wars or cooking, but this keeps me entertained. Have my daily power stone. Keep it up............................
Ya estoy en el cap 70 y la verdad me encanta este fic. Y más por ser de shokugeki no soma. La escritura es fluida y los personajes son bien descritos como son. Además personalmente esta en mi top 5 de los mejores fics que leí.
Very good so far usually I dont read ff like this one but its good for a change keep the good work going thx
no racism, no country proud moment, no chinese idiom and meme that make you cringe. what's more do you need?
This is a multiverse story (I believe) and at the time of writing this he so far only has access to food wars. The food wars part is actually quite entertaining with him doing different things and doing stuff outside of the original story. what I worry about is (when he 'leaves' the food wars world and enters another one) that the food wars world will never be mentioned again because it seems like it's kinda over with the system missions for that world.
Writing quality is too notch! Not to mention the pace is perfect. The interaction feels natural not forced. Author knows what he is writing.
Of course, it’s a 5-star rating from me! Now, let me give you a taste of what to expect from this book. First off, it’s a slice-of-life fanfic—no scheming, no killing, and no face-slapping enemies here. It’s all about cooking. From the sexy cover, you might have guessed that the story is set in the world of ‘Shokugeki no Soma’ (Food Wars). As you read, not only will you enjoy the story, but you’ll also find yourself getting hungry, so keep some water nearby to curb that craving!
This story is like a real movie or drama and interaction btw characters are smooth.. so yeah best slow romance + character building + word building this is op 😁
love all the characters in this novel, Sui and Erina's relationship feels incredibly natural. It's been a joy to watch it unfold. This story is 100% worth the read. Homie also uploads like crazy on a consistent basis!
good story. I hope for more chapters. End of complete review with points to meet the number of characters...................................
es bastante buenaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Я очень благодарен автору за это прекрасное произведение (на момент 197 глав). Медленная и в тоже время быстрая романтическая история, постоянные мини проблемы, и отлично выбранные персонажи делают её не забываемой. Единственное, что я заметил не так, это про количество языков бога, он есть у Эрины и Суи, а также у матери Эрины, Маны, кого автор и забыл посчитать. Но это не беда. История реально замечательная! С нетерпением жду ещё глав!
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This book is a GREAT Food wars fanfic, the settings are great, the crossovers are great, and the food wars aspect itself is one of the best in Webnovel. There’s just one thing that I hate in this book. The MC is a bastard. Sure, it might be hypocritical of me to hate those kind of MC since I like the harem genre. But, just reading how the MC is havin an affair with two other girls and the last one is literally by r@p3? In my opinion, the romance aspect in this book is good. Very even, but the progression is sometimes forced and similar to those Chinese novel where it’s MC can’t keep his weiner in check and pretty much turns into a gigolo while stil saying “I cant leave (main girl) since I love her. But I still love you”. Hate those kind of romance tbh. I rather have brainrot kind of harem then this. Overall: GREAT STORY if you’re searching for Food Wars fanfic. But don’t expect much on the romance part. It’s all my opinion, if you disagree then it’s fine. Thank you
Based on one of my favorite underrated anime 'Food Wars' containing the perfect balance of mouth watering food and ero visuals. Great expectations from it, hope author doesn't disappoint.
Love it!! Love it!! Love it!!! 😍😍😍 This is one of the best (cooking & slice of life) fanfiction!!! 👍👍 It have a very great plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like this kind of story (cooking & slice of life) where MC get system which improve his cooking skill little by little when he done his quest/mission.. MC/Sui system also give him an change to buy more fantasy ingredient which he already get first from mission/quest.. I think you should give him more fantasy recipe, he only have 5 for now?? I like so much MC/Sui interaction with others (Erina, Soma, Polaris dorm people, etc).. But I think you should give him more interactions in his original world people (Luna, his Rep Class, Utaha, etc), you don't forget that he still highschooler in his original world don't you author?? You make him so busy in Totsuki world, than he only back to his world to open his Snack Bar and sleep, than back to Totsuki world.. And why he don't go to 2nd world?? I think it's still ok if Tohru still with Kobayashi, he can do the 2nd mission by get fantasy ingredients from 2nd world.. He can befriend Tohru, Kobayashi, etc with his cooking skill.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍
Spoiler de révélation I don't review like ever but this one uhh.. ok, so the anime characters are well portrayed, quality is great, heck even the system is great. the character of the mc is best described a weirdo and one that is in no way likable. I read some reviews saying it's a translation so you will basically have to bear a Chinese protagonist thinking it's perfectly normal to S.A. a girl. I have read a LOT of MTLs and can cope with most the mcs with ease but this one I'd suggest anyone to pass. However if you've become immune to this poison then I can't say much. Well, hope this review helps prevent some casualitis
If you switch off your brain to avoid reasoning out its plot errors, it's not so bad, because it has forced plot errors that are a bit silly.
it is an enjoyable read for me. i just wonder when will MC start explaining about his ability to erina, not everything but the world traveler part and what it is really means. i think it's necessary progress for the relationship and the novel just gloss it over.
the pacing is a bit slow and chapters are short other than that it's pretty good
Amazing fanfic. One of the quickest authors to update massive chunks of chapters without a decrease in quality!! I highly recommend reading.
Cool ..........................................................................................................................................................More pls
Spoiler de révélation Its good fanfic, good work for you author. If you seek comedy and SoL genre, you can try this novel, there is not fight scene till now, dunno in future. SNS as base my point is, its good and i recommend you to read it
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idk what it is but story seems to be going downhill for me, i enjoyed it alot more for the earlier chapters but with the recent additions its kinda turning me away from reading the story, will update after i read more chapters
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Honestly not a huge fan of food wars or cooking, but this keeps me entertained. Have my daily power stone. Keep it up............................
Ya estoy en el cap 70 y la verdad me encanta este fic. Y más por ser de shokugeki no soma. La escritura es fluida y los personajes son bien descritos como son. Además personalmente esta en mi top 5 de los mejores fics que leí.
Very good so far usually I dont read ff like this one but its good for a change keep the good work going thx
no racism, no country proud moment, no chinese idiom and meme that make you cringe. what's more do you need?
This is a multiverse story (I believe) and at the time of writing this he so far only has access to food wars. The food wars part is actually quite entertaining with him doing different things and doing stuff outside of the original story. what I worry about is (when he 'leaves' the food wars world and enters another one) that the food wars world will never be mentioned again because it seems like it's kinda over with the system missions for that world.
Writing quality is too notch! Not to mention the pace is perfect. The interaction feels natural not forced. Author knows what he is writing.
Of course, it’s a 5-star rating from me! Now, let me give you a taste of what to expect from this book. First off, it’s a slice-of-life fanfic—no scheming, no killing, and no face-slapping enemies here. It’s all about cooking. From the sexy cover, you might have guessed that the story is set in the world of ‘Shokugeki no Soma’ (Food Wars). As you read, not only will you enjoy the story, but you’ll also find yourself getting hungry, so keep some water nearby to curb that craving!