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Pokemon Rebirth: Rise of Punit[Not Continued]

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Auteur: Vivid_Horizons

2.82 (17 audimat)

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I jolted awake, my heart hammering like I’d just outrun a Gyarados.

The wooden beams above me were etched with carvings of Pokémon, details so crisp it felt wrong, unfamiliar.

Panic clawed its way up my throat as my hands gripped a soft, clean bedspread—completely different from the scratchy, cheap sheets I remembered.

Where was I?

The room was filled with signs of a life that wasn’t mine—Charmander, Squirtle, and Bulbasaur posters lining the walls, shelves cluttered with memorabilia.

A photo on the dresser stopped me cold—a boy and his parents, all smiles.

But the faces...they tugged at something deep inside me, a connection I couldn’t place.

When I stumbled to the mirror, it hit me like a freight train.

The boy staring back wasn’t me—not the me I remembered.

The reflection was younger, smaller, but the sharp intelligence in those midnight-black eyes? That was still mine.

I wasn’t just waking up in some random room.

I had become someone else, someone living in the Pokémon world.

And with the powers I felt coursing through me—unlimited money, instant move learning, rapid evolution—this wasn’t just a new life.

It was a chance to rewrite everything.

A world to conquer, trainers to defeat.

Ash, Gary, Blaze—they didn’t know what was coming.

This world was mine now.

And no one—no one—was going to stop me.

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Nyxio
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Ok, I am sure this is written mostly by AI. Author not understanding English comments also reinforce this. Poor guy doesn’t even know that AI took over his writing when he only asked it to edit.

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H3X
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Usually I’m down for an edgy MC however he’s too in his head granted I have only read to chapter 6. But it’s like every other paragraph is him going on and on about how he is scared of everything and it is harder to survive in the world due to it being real life. But after he does that for every single thing he does it is legitimately aggravating when you are genuinely interested in seeing how he will eventually develop not constantly going on and on and not doing anything about it. Especially when it’s alluding that he was an adult, so he needs to grow up. He may have changed later in the story and I do not intend to put down the work itself because I am sure it is a solid piece with great potential, it unfortunately for me did not get to that point soon enough.

3mth
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Abhay_Adhikari_6709

Seems like a fanfic written by Chat GPT. I have read alot of fanfics written in this style, where there is very little dailougue, and they just describe everything instead. Overall, not impressed![img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

2mth
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Kamishiro_Andres

It started well, it has a lot of potential if the inserted female OC that ruined the story is removed, in a somewhat brutal way, the story is passable at best, I leave this review if there is someone who likes to read reviews before reading a story so as not to have to waste their time if the story is bad, the story itself is good, except for the forced romance and illogical and forced manipulation of sentimentality that the protagonist should not have, everything is very good, giving it 3 stars is because it has potential or well, it had.

2mth
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Beyond_

I'm not an expert in writing but it's simply noticeable when someone uses an AI. When you read it, you feel something is wrong, you don't know what it is but something is obviously wrong.

2mth
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BaelyrionDRGN

the moment he interacted with misty i quit reading. it ruined it. too much nonsense. wasted chapters. so disappointing. bye bye bye ... sigh ...

2mth
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Danger_Zone_69

Brother if you can. please check out after getting your Ai done with it's correction. If you yourself read again you can change some stuff that Ai couldn't change. Although Ai can write many chapters there was no creativity in them it will copy from some sources. If this story is your writing then please check it out yourself before releaseing

2mth
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Vivid_Horizons

**Author's Note:** Punit's Pokémon operate under a unique system that assigns milestone points based on their battle victories. These points aren't a form of currency, but rather key indicators of which he use for significant changes to occur—like a Pokémon evolving or learning a new move. For instance, to evolve his Bulbasaur into Ivysaur, Punit needs Bulbasaur to reach 16 points. At present, Bulbasaur has 4 points, and it would need 12 points to instantly teach Razor Leaf by punit. Each Pokémon has different milestones; for example, Pidgey already has 5 points. Points are earned when a Pokémon defeats another, whether it’s wild or owned by a trainer, but it cannot be one of Punit’s own Pokémon.

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3mth
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Aayush_storms

Highly recommended to those seeing this review. Today's Pokemon fics in the name of originality don't make a straightforward reincarnation Pokemon adventures but after so long it is finally here on webnovel. Please show this fic some support guys.

3mth
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Fito
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Well, normally I like a Pokemon story, but why put the MC on a Pokemon journey with unlimited powers? Doesn't that take away from the character development? Besides, many things are difficult to understand at first.

2mth
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DaoistkO2QwU

getting on my nerves this writing after 7 chapter I quit I ckecked later for 10-20 no not getting into it

2mth
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Friendly_Immortal

Looks like it has been written by an AI with author not even paying attention to the story and character build even after giving MC powerful boosts he's behaving like a child suspicious of everything.

2mth
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Lycrat
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Too dramatic, feels like written by AI. Anyways, try to rely less on AI or make it less dramatic/tense

2mth
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Vivid_Horizons

"Hello, I'm Vivid Horizons, the author, and I've published character reference images. All of them were created using AI—some I generated myself, while others were contributed by readers."

3mth
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DragonoftheNorth

Christ on a Crucifix, this is cringe.. MC is acting like a 90's emo teen. chapter titles are cringe. no system Stat panel seems redundant. I rather watch Sasuke Uchiha brood over his vendetta than read this....

2mth
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Vivid_Horizons

Hey readers, I am an author writing here. if you are gonna read this fanfiction, I want to clear something first so it will not waste your time: 1. I write a chapter myself first then use chatgpt to enhance it[ according to me, maybe you do not agree] then i edit what I think should edit then upload here. 2. I am not good with English and I am very lazy, so that is why I am using chatgpt for help. 3. I am writing for fun and I don't want to hire a human editor. 4.There would be 3 to 5 chapters daily, maybe some time 10 to 15 depending on my excitement to write but 3 to 5 chapters is sure. 5. Each chapter is between 900 to 1000 words maybe some 1300 to 1400 or maybe some 700 to 800 but my focus would be on at 900 to 1000 words. 6. If you like it please read, if you don't then you know what to do, as if you read please give suggestions so i can make things more interesting or at least try. 7.You can leave your suggestion anywhere in the novel, chapter comment, review, paragraph comment, I will read and if it fits the story I will apply and I will surely thank you. 8. Now comes the protagonist, some people say it is edgy, as I did not know much about it , but I am writing according to what if I live in Pokemon world, first take some time to get used to it, then slowly slowly show confidence and stay relaxed most of time and enjoy the life, in the beginning chapter it's might make you not to read but I understand everyone have their own preferences. 9. Now come romantic interest as whoever read until that chapter where first female lead come, i get it i make her annoying (maybe too much annoying) but as you see this is first novel I write myself, so I don't know how to show her personality right but after that i know some things so i try not make same problem with other female leads. 10. There is going to be only one romantic relationship in each region but in the end when punit become Pokemon master he going to marry only one girl. that's it , if something i want to tell you I will leave another review, thanks for reading this review, this review might be big but maybe it can save you time later.

2mth
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Volume 1

  1. 1
    Chapter 1: Awakening 3 months ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2: The Dawn of Choices 3 months ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3: A New Beginning 3 months ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4: Into the Unknown 3 months ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5: The First Catch 3 months ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6: Treading the Abyss 3 months ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7: The Storm's Edge 3 months ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8: Storm of Secrets 3 months ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9: Shadows on the Horizon 3 months ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10: Shadows at the Cliff's Edge 3 months ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11: The Weight of the Night 3 months ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12: Shadows in the Pokémon Center 3 months ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13: Smoke and Chaos 3 months ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14: Whispers of Victory 3 months ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15: Cold Ambition 3 months ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16: A New Day, A New Hunt 3 months ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17: Collision Course 3 months ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18: Bargains and The Market 3 months ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19: The Game Begins 3 months ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20: The Hunt Begins 3 months ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21: The Forest’s Challenge 3 months ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22: The Pikachu Trap 3 months ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23: The Battle for Pikachu 3 months ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24: Tornado Strike 3 months ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25: Shadows in Viridian Forest 3 months ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26: Into the Forest's Grasp 3 months ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27: Unforeseen Encounters 3 months ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28: Marriage Proposal 3 months ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29: Injured Pikachu Plan 3 months ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30: Camping and Johto Stories 3 months ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31: The Road Ahead and Unspoken Fears 3 months ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32: Pewter City Arrival and Plans 3 months ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33: Punit and Alisha's Plans 3 months ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34: Ivysaur vs Golem Battle 3 months ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35: Romantic Dinner in Pewter 3 months ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36: Morning Pokémon Center Brief 3 months ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37: Evolving Pikachu to Raichu 3 months ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38: Hiking and Sketching Adventure 3 months ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39: Into the Moonlit Path 3 months ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 40: Faces in the Dark 2 months ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 41: Dreams and Aspirations 2 months ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 42: Clefairy Encounter in Moon 2 months ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 43: Escaping Mount Moon 2 months ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 44: Evolving Pidgeotoo And Raichu's Battle Rescue 2 months ago
  45. 45
    Chapter 45: Bound by Fate 2 months ago
  46. 46
    Chapter 46: New System Functions Revealed 2 months ago
  47. 47
    Chapter 47: Cerulean Gym Visit 2 months ago
  48. 48
    Chapter 48: A Deal with Oak 2 months ago
  49. 49
    Chapter 49: Magikarp Market Scam 2 months ago
  50. 50
    Chapter 50: Into the Fog 2 months ago
  51. 51
    Chapter 51: Meeting Erin Oak 2 months ago
  52. 52
    Chapter 52: Lessons Beyond the Battlefield 2 months ago
  53. 53
    Chapter 53: Awkward Encounters and Missteps 2 months ago
  54. 54
    Chapter 54: Forest Argument and Humor 2 months ago
  55. 55
    Chapter 55: Into the Eye of the Hurricane 2 months ago
  56. 56
    Chapter 56: Erin's Fear of Pokémon 2 months ago
  57. 57
    Chapter 57: Tangled Fates: Erin and Punit 2 months ago
  58. 58
    Chapter 58: Caught in the Rain 2 months ago
  59. 59
    Chapter 59: A Heated Encounter 2 months ago
  60. 60
    Chapter 60: Raichu's Comforting Moment 2 months ago
  61. 61
    Chapter 61: Charmander's Escape and Damian's Downfall 2 months ago
  62. 62
    Chapter 62: Trapped and Tested 2 months ago
  63. 63
    Chapter 63: The Hidden Evolution 2 months ago
  64. 64
    Chapter 64: Gyarados Awakens 2 months ago
  65. 65
    Chapter 65: The Path of Rivals 2 months ago
  66. 66
    Chapter 66: Erin's Condition 2 months ago
  67. 67
    Chapter 67: Pokémon and Pride 2 months ago
  68. 68
    Chapter 68: Lighthouse Encounter Drama 2 months ago
  69. 69
    Chapter 69: Kiss Compliment Confusion 2 months ago
  70. 70
    Chapter 70: Mysterious Pokémon Research Discussion 2 months ago
  71. 71
    Chapter 71: Lighthouse Reflections and Confessions 2 months ago
  72. 72
    Chapter 72: Pidgeot Raichu vs Dragonite 2 months ago
  73. 73
    Chapter 73: Battle for Win 2 months ago
  74. 74
    Chapter 74: The Dragonite's Gift 2 months ago
  75. 75
    Chapter 75: Diverging Paths 2 months ago
  76. 76
    Chapter 76: Shopping for New clothes 2 months ago
  77. 77
    Chapter 77: Surge's Challenge 2 months ago
  78. 78
    Chapter 78: Showdown at Vermilion Gym 2 months ago
  79. 79
    Chapter 79: Thunder Badge Victory Chat 2 months ago
  80. 80
    Chapter 80: Cruise Chaos Begins 2 months ago
  81. 81
    Chapter 81: Jumping Into Conflict 2 months ago
  82. 82
    Chapter 82: Legacy of the Dragonite 2 months ago
  83. 83
    Chapter 83: Raichu and Punit's Banter 2 months ago
  84. 84
    Chapter 84: Punit Raichu vs Exeggutor Battle 2 months ago
  85. 85
    Chapter 85: The Ballroom Showdown 2 months ago
  86. 86
    Chapter 86: Discussion with Erin 2 months ago
  87. 87
    Chapter 87: Stormy Encounter with Team Rocket 2 months ago
  88. 88
    Chapter 88: Dratini vs Gengar Battle 2 months ago
  89. 89
    Chapter 89: Dratini vs Kangaskhan 2 months ago
  90. 90
    Chapter 90: Alakazam vs Kangaskhan 2 months ago
  91. 91
    Chapter 91: Alakazam vs Golbat 2 months ago
  92. 92
    Chapter 92: Alakazam vs Arbok 2 months ago
  93. 93
    Chapter 93 Alakazam vs Nidoking 2 months ago
  94. 94
    Chapter 94: Alakazam The Psychic Powerhouse 2 months ago
  95. 95
    Chapter 95: The Jump of the Black Fang 2 months ago
  96. 96
    Chapter 96: Unlocked a New Function 2 months ago
  97. 97
    Chapter 97: Emergency on St Anne 2 months ago
  98. 98
    Chapter 98: Next Plan 2 months ago
  99. 99
    Chapter 99: Hutber Port Speedboat Departure 2 months ago
  100. 100
    Chapter 100: Healing Pokémon and Raichu 2 months ago
  101. 101
    Chapter 101: Raichu Ultimate Move 2 months ago
  102. 102
    Chapter 102: Dratini vs Venusaur Ultimate Moves Battle 2 months ago
  103. 103
    Chapter 103: Plans and Kimonos 2 months ago
  104. 104
    Chapter 104: Festival Encounter with Friends 2 months ago
  105. 105
    Chapter 105: Shadow 2 months ago
  106. 106
    Chapter 106 Punit vs Kade Battle 2 months ago
  107. 107
    Chapter 107: Punit vs Kade Battle 2 2 months ago
  108. 108
    Chapter 108: I was tricked 2 months ago
  109. 109
    Chapter 109: Why I was tricked? 2 months ago
  110. 110
    Chapter 110: Misty's Shock Encounter 2 months ago
  111. 111
    Chapter 111: Battle of Maiden's Peak 2 months ago
  112. 112
    Chapter 112: Creepy Encounter at Midnight 2 months ago
  113. 113
    Chapter 113: Matching Kimonos 2 months ago
  114. 114
    Chapter 114: Saffron City Arrival 2 months ago
  115. 115
    Chapter 115: Psychic Showdown in Saffron 2 months ago
  116. 116
    Chapter 116: Breakfast Plans and Goals 2 months ago
  117. 117
    Chapter 117: Creepy Tower Adventure 2 months ago
  118. 118
    Chapter 118: Sibling Banter and Trust 2 months ago
  119. 119
    Chapter 119: Camping Plans and Precautions 2 months ago
  120. 120
    Chapter 120: Gengar's Tactical Advantage Battle 2 months ago
  121. 121
    Chapter 121: Shadow Battle Strategy 2 months ago
  122. 122
    Chapter 122: Battle of Supremacy 2 months ago
  123. 123
    Chapter 123: Primeape vs Nidoking Battle 2 months ago
  124. 124
    Chapter 124: Jealousy and Attention 2 months ago
  125. 125
    Chapter 125: Pokémon Plans and Conflicts 2 months ago
  126. 126
    Chapter 126: Gyarados for Growlithe Swap 2 months ago
  127. 127
    Chapter 127: Evolving Growlithe to Arcanine 2 months ago
  128. 128
    Chapter 128: Perfume Shop Confrontation 2 months ago