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Early review! I must say I'm a sucker for this kind of genres and I love the historical/mythological references madei n the story as well as the language diversity and overall story settings. You have the vision, and I'm here for it. Keep it up🫴💙🫂
I'm super impressed with this book! It's exciting and fun, and the pacing is great. I'm excited to see what happens to Daniel! Would definitely recommend this!
Great story. I like the characters and their bangers and the sow setup for the future chapters feels natural and well thought out. The kids are a highlight. Highly recommended, it’s worth the time.
The author has a really ambitious project here. I like where he's going with this and am really eager to see where this ends. The beginning chapters are slightly unpolished, but I believe the plot more than enough compensates for this. Good luck!
Quite intriguing👏👏👏👏 really love how d plot was unfolding. Makes me feel like I am one with the characters. Thats a good one, author. Looking forward to reading more☺️☺️☺️☺️
love the story... its exciting, and well reviews generally differ from each persons experience. Daniel is a unique character that inspired even myself the way the author just projects himself as though he is the god in it is so wonderful, l mean must feel godly right author? You could add more visual aspects n l loved the media res u did awesome indeed 👏 💜
No wonder it got a contract..... it's good! Though there's still room for improvement. Learn more and more power to your writings. I can say the author is above the average and better than most. Kudos for a job well done.
I must say I love your writing style 😊😊😊, I also love the genre 🥺🥺, can't wait to read more, it's really captivating .
Great story! Three chapters in, and I'm already introduced to some cool concepts that keep me hooked. The writing style is definitely the strongpoint of the story, but I also love the worldbuilding that goes into increasing immersion. Has great potential!
A rather interesting story with an interesting premise and set up to go with it. The scenario featured so far seems to building up to number of things. With gaps between chapters that can used to example or reveal what happened during them later on
The idea's unexpectedly good. Got me hooked after first chapter. A preety solid read to be honest. Looking forward to more.
The earlier chapters are a bit confusing but action packed nonetheless, the mystery aspect alone is a great reason to read this novel. Its not a novel i would read but its definitely something the readers of webnovel would enjoy.
The direction of the World background is a bit confusing, at the begining but i think it will get better, the main character is a little hard to get, what is he? how is he? but that is also the magic of it all i cant wait to see how it progresses
Very nice concept. The story is slow and without any info dumps, but not too slow to become boring. But I don't really like the story all that much although its a nice one, what i do like more is the writing style, very immersive and takes step by step. I've only read the first chapter and I might edit this later
Quite the tale that tries to dive into existence. A lot of questions to ask, but more to answer. Starts off face-paced and with a tons of actions. This Author's characters are developed interestingly. Some interesting personalities, too. The fantasy elements is what might let you explore more in what the author often thinks about life. Recommended only for high-fantasy, adventure fiction readers.
"You're absolutely amazing! 👍👍 Keep up the fantastic work! The book is really engaging and has me hooked. I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more of it! 💯❤️❤️"
currently, only 10 chapters so might be still a little early, but the novel has a nice premise and is engaging. a bit more clarity would suffice but keep it up
Hi lads, Author here, sharing my ideas on the story. Honestly, it was a leap of faith. I had the idea and ran towards it, making this piece of art. I hope you all enjoy it, and my objective is to show my readers a new world of imagination. Thank you all ^^
Early review! I must say I'm a sucker for this kind of genres and I love the historical/mythological references madei n the story as well as the language diversity and overall story settings. You have the vision, and I'm here for it. Keep it up🫴💙🫂
I'm super impressed with this book! It's exciting and fun, and the pacing is great. I'm excited to see what happens to Daniel! Would definitely recommend this!
Great story. I like the characters and their bangers and the sow setup for the future chapters feels natural and well thought out. The kids are a highlight. Highly recommended, it’s worth the time.
The author has a really ambitious project here. I like where he's going with this and am really eager to see where this ends. The beginning chapters are slightly unpolished, but I believe the plot more than enough compensates for this. Good luck!
Quite intriguing👏👏👏👏 really love how d plot was unfolding. Makes me feel like I am one with the characters. Thats a good one, author. Looking forward to reading more☺️☺️☺️☺️
love the story... its exciting, and well reviews generally differ from each persons experience. Daniel is a unique character that inspired even myself the way the author just projects himself as though he is the god in it is so wonderful, l mean must feel godly right author? You could add more visual aspects n l loved the media res u did awesome indeed 👏 💜
No wonder it got a contract..... it's good! Though there's still room for improvement. Learn more and more power to your writings. I can say the author is above the average and better than most. Kudos for a job well done.
I must say I love your writing style 😊😊😊, I also love the genre 🥺🥺, can't wait to read more, it's really captivating .
Great story! Three chapters in, and I'm already introduced to some cool concepts that keep me hooked. The writing style is definitely the strongpoint of the story, but I also love the worldbuilding that goes into increasing immersion. Has great potential!
A rather interesting story with an interesting premise and set up to go with it. The scenario featured so far seems to building up to number of things. With gaps between chapters that can used to example or reveal what happened during them later on
The idea's unexpectedly good. Got me hooked after first chapter. A preety solid read to be honest. Looking forward to more.
The earlier chapters are a bit confusing but action packed nonetheless, the mystery aspect alone is a great reason to read this novel. Its not a novel i would read but its definitely something the readers of webnovel would enjoy.
The direction of the World background is a bit confusing, at the begining but i think it will get better, the main character is a little hard to get, what is he? how is he? but that is also the magic of it all i cant wait to see how it progresses
Very nice concept. The story is slow and without any info dumps, but not too slow to become boring. But I don't really like the story all that much although its a nice one, what i do like more is the writing style, very immersive and takes step by step. I've only read the first chapter and I might edit this later
Quite the tale that tries to dive into existence. A lot of questions to ask, but more to answer. Starts off face-paced and with a tons of actions. This Author's characters are developed interestingly. Some interesting personalities, too. The fantasy elements is what might let you explore more in what the author often thinks about life. Recommended only for high-fantasy, adventure fiction readers.
"You're absolutely amazing! 👍👍 Keep up the fantastic work! The book is really engaging and has me hooked. I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more of it! 💯❤️❤️"
currently, only 10 chapters so might be still a little early, but the novel has a nice premise and is engaging. a bit more clarity would suffice but keep it up
Hi lads, Author here, sharing my ideas on the story. Honestly, it was a leap of faith. I had the idea and ran towards it, making this piece of art. I hope you all enjoy it, and my objective is to show my readers a new world of imagination. Thank you all ^^
Its so thrilling, Cant wait to flip more pages. keep up the good work 👍
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