Chiyo_Kobayashi

Chiyo_Kobayashi

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2023-04-04 Joint Global
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Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
10 days ago
Posted

This book really has no flaws. This is an early review but I know I wouldn't take back my words... I love the characters, both the main and supporting characters. They all have their unique personality that makes me want to read this story till its very end. Good work author. Keep writing...

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
6 months ago
Posted

Early review! I must say I'm a sucker for this kind of genres and I love the historical/mythological references madei n the story as well as the language diversity and overall story settings. You have the vision, and I'm here for it. Keep it up🫴💙🫂

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
7 months ago
Replied to Milllion

Right!

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The Divine Core

The Divine Core

Fantasy · Chiyo Kobayashi

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
7 months ago
Replied to Fallency

Well, there's one more to it...

Akira and Yua burst out a loud laughter.

The Divine Core

The Divine Core

Fantasy · Chiyo Kobayashi

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
11 months ago
Commented

"Itai" means "It hurts" in Japanese[img=recommend]

'Itai… What is this sensation? I haven't felt this in ages… Is this… the feeling of death? How long has it been?'

The Divine Core

The Divine Core

Fantasy · Chiyo Kobayashi

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
11 months ago
Posted

Early review! This really is a breath of fresh air. There's not much to say since there isn't enough chapters to really give my overall thoughts, but for now, I just know this would be a superb story. It has this poetic feel to it with a mixture of something that just lure me into the plot. Great work, and keep writing![img=strong]

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
11 months ago
Posted

The story is great, unique its own right. My only genuine gripe about it is the writer's upload schedule. Like wtf? I need more! A little tip as well: try breaking your paragraphs for a more visually appealing sight for your readers. Also, I encourage you to do periodic proof readings of your work. It could be every volume, every 50+ chapters or whatever schedule type that fits you, because I detected a few typos here and there. Overall, it's a pretty decent read. Highly recommend[img=recommend]

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
11 months ago
Posted

I came into this novel with high expectations based off the reviews it got, and it did not disappoint. Right off the first chapter, I just kept going and going and going til I hit the paywalled chapter. This is my early review, and I'm here to tell you that you won't be disappointed. Kudos, author. Love this work so much![img=recommend]

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
11 months ago
Replied to DylanHusand

Hi there👋

Chiyo_Kobayashi
Chiyo_Kobayashi
11 months ago
Commented

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"God's love is divided", a 14-year-old Henry Martin mumbled to himself with his eyes crimson red and his blood boiling, his left hand clinging ever so tightly to his little sister and his right hand a rusty dagger he picked up a few days ago while searching for food and clothing.

The Forsaken Ones

The Forsaken Ones

Fantasy · JayModii