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The World Walking Original Siphoner (SI, OC)

テレビ 61 Chapitres 1.5M Affichage
Auteur: Shane_Town

4.57 (45 audimat)

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Synopsis

Guy dies wakes up in the vampire diaries universe as a child of Mikael and Esther but he's a Siphoner due to Dahlia's spell to allow Esther to conceive children (si) Tags: #Hire, #Loyal Protagonist, #Revenge, #Possible Crossover, #Harem, #Possible Harem, #Wish Fulfillment, #Dark Themes, #Murderer, #Killer, #R18 #Bad Smut, #Keeping it in the Family (Wink Wink Alabama style) #Porn without plot at times #Gore

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night_king01010

good story till now just don't stop the story midway

6mth
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SnorlaxLord

I had already thought before about what would happen if a Siphon became an Original, in The Vampire Diaries the Siphon/Vampire Hybrids theoretically have an infinite battery of magic which is their Vampirism, so theoretically they can do any magic without many problems Now what would happen if the Magic of Vampirism was Esther's Modified Immortality Spell as a battery, what would that do to a Siphon?

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JustTheAverageKen

It's...not my cup of tea. But I like the idea behind it though. So forgive me, author, but I plan on stealing the idea from you! <insert Evil Laugh>

6mth
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Shane_Town

it's a hot mess, but a lot of things are on here.

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Ronin46

The story till now is interesting and well developed though interactions with characters could be done better but still 5 chap in so still too early to talk about it, in anycase this story can be either good as fk or be a flop depending on how it develops should still definitely give it a try. Also will say directly anyone that doesn't like ìncést can just get the héll out of here.

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Niloy_Das

Too slow. They are not even vampires yet.

6mth
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Insert_Here

This is really good here's to hoping there will be 100+ chapters of this masterpiece [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=update]

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NiklasXY

Some good stuff, do u have a p@treon with advaced chapters? need to fill in the character sdukajfukahsdfukadsfuihaskudhAUOSHdiyasiaoshdioadoi

6mth
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Raj_tiwari_1387

good story till now I just hope yy don't drop midway 🥰

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Cody_Mohr

truly a great story so far hopefully it continues it would be interesting to see how this goes for the transition to vampires

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LukeMorningStar

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CouchPotatoDandy

One of the most incomprehensible fanfics I've ever read, jumping from one thing to the other without any explanation. This gave me an headache and although I quite liked the plot and story I found myself dropping it a chapter 5.

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RustyBoi

Disappointing on many levels, to say the least, especially ever since Lagertha died and he regressed to the point he’s a cliché “vampire that can’t control himself”, and worse, he became someone that even Edward Cullen would be put off by how edgy he is

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Maddy_0112

great work ... do not drop it and do not make MC Dumb as the story proceeds.

4mth
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Fuhrer_Ladin

just one word for this perfect update is nice could have been better at many aspects but u cover up with other things ..

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4mth
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monkeydashura

love the series so far keep up the good work when are dropping the original novel and also the kai parker story under various dropped ff continue the excellence content

4mth
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DaoistPx1s33

Great story so far. I just hope the author doesn't drop it midway.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

5mth
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david_bresee

what happened to Son's Of Anarchy/Fast & Furious (SI) why is it at 0 chapters it was a good book will you be putting it back on webnovel I LOVED IT

5mth
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ACHILLES

Okay actual legit review other than the spams its a good story alot of time skips after they became vampires then mc meeting pirates of carribean in his verse it was cool but no character interaction and they were all buddy buddy, Then found out mc heading to an new verse/shadow hunter after. So He's not sticking through Tvd from what i understand now if author doesn't fix the character interaction or make the same mistake with mc and sparrow fic can go down quick and it feels like it rn. The Begging were fantastic though than became Eh after he became an original which you think would be the opposite take it how you like either good or bad.

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