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love the novel. Author, you should have someone proofread your chapter before publishing because the grammar errors throw me off sometimes.
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If you are here for Warhammer, there is only up to chapter 5 before it goes to mc travelling to Fate anime. The warhammer side is very fast passed and lots are glossed over so the mc can fast finish his mission and get into Fate, which seems to be what the story is really about. Personally, this is where it just got boring for me. Again, this is me personally as I haven't watched Fate and am not much interested in it. So, for me, it started very well before it just lost my interest. Still is great with good grammar. Just if you are not a Fate fan, it might not be for you. I would still give it a read, though, make your own decision if you like where it goes or not.
honestly chapter 20 killed the story for me 10K years of suffering heal ed from ONE battle Bullshit. it changed the hole feel of the story for me.overall the story was good but this just feels like the Mc was rewrote but loved your old story Dao kitty hope to see what other story you'll make
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An obligatory self review. My writing quality is obviously not that great, just average. The same as world background since I'm not that good at explaining. To those that wonder if this is a continuation of my previous fic or a rewrite. This is not, I use same idea that all. Everything else is different. This fic I decided to go on very slow pace and focus more on character and relationships development which I failed miserably in the past fic.
It's a good work, worth checking out. And I believe it should improve, since the space between chapters will increase, giving the author more time to cook.
I just saw a grey knight as your profile pic and was like another Warhammer 40k fic lovely
Well, I was interested in that fanfic because of Warhammer. But I was surprised that i still liked it when he switches to Fate something that i found on the internet cos i didn't know at all about this game/manga? Anyway I binged all the 13 chapters in a night, good stuff. You should give it a try!
New fav fic haha its quite good But system being an annoyance and forcing mc decisions......annoyed me
The previous story was great. I just have one question. Will theSF T-Dolls of Girls Frontline be there like in the previous one? Because it's a shame that the girls from Girls Frontline barely appear in fanfic. The only other decent one where I read it was in Transmigrator Commander of Girls Frontline must not be a Reckless man
i hope chapter to come and im excited to read this novel and my current fav genre right now Advanced technology , sci fi as long as space related [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
this author is good not just good he's godly to me, especially with his latest chapters of the Sas fanfic though I do hope the mc in this one has a large harem and not like the previous one were he only had 4 but could've easily gotten a lot
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love the novel. Author, you should have someone proofread your chapter before publishing because the grammar errors throw me off sometimes.
Spoiler de révélation If you are here for Warhammer, there is only up to chapter 5 before it goes to mc travelling to Fate anime. The warhammer side is very fast passed and lots are glossed over so the mc can fast finish his mission and get into Fate, which seems to be what the story is really about. Personally, this is where it just got boring for me. Again, this is me personally as I haven't watched Fate and am not much interested in it. So, for me, it started very well before it just lost my interest. Still is great with good grammar. Just if you are not a Fate fan, it might not be for you. I would still give it a read, though, make your own decision if you like where it goes or not.
honestly chapter 20 killed the story for me 10K years of suffering heal ed from ONE battle Bullshit. it changed the hole feel of the story for me.overall the story was good but this just feels like the Mc was rewrote but loved your old story Dao kitty hope to see what other story you'll make
Spoiler de révélation An obligatory self review. My writing quality is obviously not that great, just average. The same as world background since I'm not that good at explaining. To those that wonder if this is a continuation of my previous fic or a rewrite. This is not, I use same idea that all. Everything else is different. This fic I decided to go on very slow pace and focus more on character and relationships development which I failed miserably in the past fic.
It's a good work, worth checking out. And I believe it should improve, since the space between chapters will increase, giving the author more time to cook.
I just saw a grey knight as your profile pic and was like another Warhammer 40k fic lovely
Well, I was interested in that fanfic because of Warhammer. But I was surprised that i still liked it when he switches to Fate something that i found on the internet cos i didn't know at all about this game/manga? Anyway I binged all the 13 chapters in a night, good stuff. You should give it a try!
New fav fic haha its quite good But system being an annoyance and forcing mc decisions......annoyed me
The previous story was great. I just have one question. Will theSF T-Dolls of Girls Frontline be there like in the previous one? Because it's a shame that the girls from Girls Frontline barely appear in fanfic. The only other decent one where I read it was in Transmigrator Commander of Girls Frontline must not be a Reckless man
i hope chapter to come and im excited to read this novel and my current fav genre right now Advanced technology , sci fi as long as space related [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
this author is good not just good he's godly to me, especially with his latest chapters of the Sas fanfic though I do hope the mc in this one has a large harem and not like the previous one were he only had 4 but could've easily gotten a lot
Djejejsjshshs Edge Severe Fever Even Ev Ev E He V R Be Be B Tv R B Ev Ev Ev R B Ev Ev R V Ev R He V E Be V Ev Ev R Be V R V Ev Ev