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I recommend this story for new reader, it's pretty fun (so far) The characters are compelling, the background of the universe seems good The writing is competent EXCEPT for a few lines like "The MC did not know, but the people watching were in awe of his power" (I'm paraphrasing a little, but there are decfinitely lines like these), these feel a little amateurish compared to the rest of the writing style Upon encountering a line like this, you are instantly taken out of the story out of the shoes of the MC and feel like you're sitting in front of the Author listening to them praising their own character or like a kid being told a bed time story It also break the cardinal rule of 'Show don't tell'. I personally feel these lines are unnecessary but if the author feels otherwise, might i suggest simply making one of the supporting characters say this to the MC himself? At least that way we're not pulled out the story Other than that, I have zero complaints....
Great so far, he's been slowly adding more and more chapters. The novel is very similar to Percy Jackson and if you like Percy Jackson then youll like this novel
i want to find the Nobel in which men character was blind at the starting and orphan he was taken in some family for work because that family doesn't want anyone to see what they are doing he work for that family for sometime and after finding a cultivation technique in that family he regain his eye power can someone find this novel
Hello author, I'm a fan of one of your previous work titled " Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist" which I have greatly enjoyed. Thus there I am following your new novel. My question for you is: can we expect updates for "Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist" when you'll be more advanced in this story or is it dropped ? I'm sorry if this comment a little unrelated to this novel might bother, it's just that we (the previous novel follower have been expecting answers on the main page and on the discord channel with little success . With the wish that you'll answers my query, I wish the best to your new novel as a faithful follower 🙏, All hail Dragons 😁
Very good novel, the only sad thing is that it takes a while to release new chapters.
Imagine a better version of a Rick Riordan series and you have this book. More chapters soon please !🙏
Great story can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it keep up this way because it looks like our mc is going to have a hell of a journey and I was a great idea to idea greek mythology in hope maybe they would be other mythology in too like Norse mythology
I love it so far and would definitely recommend others to read. Just wish there were more chapters, but it's understandable since the novel was just released.
Great start so far, it’s been a blast to read! The writing quality is really good, the more chapters I read the more interested I get about what’s to come. I love all kinds of mythology, this focuses on Greek mythology which is awesome, the way it’s woven into the power system is also really cool. Highly recommend people check this out!
I recommend this story for new reader, it's pretty fun (so far) The characters are compelling, the background of the universe seems good The writing is competent EXCEPT for a few lines like "The MC did not know, but the people watching were in awe of his power" (I'm paraphrasing a little, but there are decfinitely lines like these), these feel a little amateurish compared to the rest of the writing style Upon encountering a line like this, you are instantly taken out of the story out of the shoes of the MC and feel like you're sitting in front of the Author listening to them praising their own character or like a kid being told a bed time story It also break the cardinal rule of 'Show don't tell'. I personally feel these lines are unnecessary but if the author feels otherwise, might i suggest simply making one of the supporting characters say this to the MC himself? At least that way we're not pulled out the story Other than that, I have zero complaints....
Great so far, he's been slowly adding more and more chapters. The novel is very similar to Percy Jackson and if you like Percy Jackson then youll like this novel
i want to find the Nobel in which men character was blind at the starting and orphan he was taken in some family for work because that family doesn't want anyone to see what they are doing he work for that family for sometime and after finding a cultivation technique in that family he regain his eye power can someone find this novel
Hello author, I'm a fan of one of your previous work titled " Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist" which I have greatly enjoyed. Thus there I am following your new novel. My question for you is: can we expect updates for "Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist" when you'll be more advanced in this story or is it dropped ? I'm sorry if this comment a little unrelated to this novel might bother, it's just that we (the previous novel follower have been expecting answers on the main page and on the discord channel with little success . With the wish that you'll answers my query, I wish the best to your new novel as a faithful follower 🙏, All hail Dragons 😁
Very good novel, the only sad thing is that it takes a while to release new chapters.
Imagine a better version of a Rick Riordan series and you have this book. More chapters soon please !🙏
Great story can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it keep up this way because it looks like our mc is going to have a hell of a journey and I was a great idea to idea greek mythology in hope maybe they would be other mythology in too like Norse mythology
I love it so far and would definitely recommend others to read. Just wish there were more chapters, but it's understandable since the novel was just released.
Great start so far, it’s been a blast to read! The writing quality is really good, the more chapters I read the more interested I get about what’s to come. I love all kinds of mythology, this focuses on Greek mythology which is awesome, the way it’s woven into the power system is also really cool. Highly recommend people check this out!