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There are some minor issues like Ron not using his muggle world knowledge or a forgotten promise but the story is interesting and engaging. The nuance in the sorting hat seremony is very clever.
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This book is hidden gem. .............................................................................................................................. ..............................................................................................................................
Book is awesome in all ways, especially the concept. Just please no harem.🙏 Having one wouldn’t even make sense and would just be wierd since it’s a bunch of little kids.
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I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"
Can someone call me back when there are at least 15 chapters ?. Also, is he going to spend all his time to gather power or is he also going to get some waifus ? I mean power without waifus feels a bit mmm..
Author is missing at this point in time. I can't find myself in MC's motivations. Those are my two only points of criticism and if that doesn't tell you that I like this story then I don't know what will.
There are some minor issues like Ron not using his muggle world knowledge or a forgotten promise but the story is interesting and engaging. The nuance in the sorting hat seremony is very clever.
Spoiler de révélation This book is hidden gem. .............................................................................................................................. ..............................................................................................................................
Book is awesome in all ways, especially the concept. Just please no harem.🙏 Having one wouldn’t even make sense and would just be wierd since it’s a bunch of little kids.
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I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"
Can someone call me back when there are at least 15 chapters ?. Also, is he going to spend all his time to gather power or is he also going to get some waifus ? I mean power without waifus feels a bit mmm..
Author is missing at this point in time. I can't find myself in MC's motivations. Those are my two only points of criticism and if that doesn't tell you that I like this story then I don't know what will.