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I read the first 130 chapters. But I have to give up. The premise was great. The first 20 chapters was good. But then it went more slice of life style and in one case took 12 chapters to advance 3 hours in the book. When I found my self scrolling through the chapter hoping for an interesting bit I realized there was other stories I could be reading. This story is great if you like slice of life and knowing what the side characters are doing day to day. But I came for the duplicating system.
Author have a Rough gem right here, If they can keep it up, It's can become a great peaceful read.
only read to chapter 21 story is good but needs to rework some of the sentences probably a translation problem plus the constant time skip then i feel like at many of the intro to a chapter or the ending is AI generated unsure if true just a feeling
I don't know about future but author really reads most of the comments and replies till now, and I have tried it with multiple accounts.... if u have any problem just a comment and see if can get a reply
An interesting work which is quite a bit different from the other novels involving a system. It's a bit refreshing to see an MC who's not looking to dominate the rankings or the market. Overall a good read and definitely worth a try.
So far the story is interesting, different from other stories which focus more on power domination (I mean he is OP but he uses his cheats with different actions). The beginning of the storyline is also unpredictable. Like he is indeed OP but not all wishes can be achieved because he has cheats, that's one of the experiences of MC's growth. The story leads to building an empire so it requires a lot of human resources. Just a little criticism when the MC is too trusting of others or how he thinks about it towards new people. And fortunately these people are not selfish and play tricks behind the scenes. Maybe explain more clearly what his thoughts are. I was confused as to why the MC didn't use his cheat to negotiate with important people in other realms and maximize profits, but if you logic it carefully there is a high risk because in this story the MC only has one life and is at risk of being colonized by other realms in the future (remember humans only new visitors compared to other realms that are already strong). Oh yes, there are several other things that bother me, such as the event system which is not really shown and I think the prizes from the epic box are too small because in the story it is explained that even nascent souls fight for it. Thanks for the story. Opening of new views.
overall the author did good just nitpicking here since he was poor you should understand that he would not limit himself to his past the food he treats as his favorites should not be limited to the Indonesian food like this mindset : when poor I can limit my spending at restaurants like KFC and McDonald i would not buy much unless it's a special day but what if i have more than enough money then nationality can be left behind. from sushi and other seafood to the signature food of other countries just the ability to be able to eat them would bring spiritual satisfaction now think with the convergence of cultures and hectic work he had to do to support his sister just the exploration of the different culinary masterpieces would be a relaxing and fun thing that would go beyond just nationality. and patriot acts a limited to those the government has helped and had a positive impact on not the poor even if they hit middle income they had no parents to influence their decision so the growth even when helping others include ensuring family safety and mental health
I just like these types of stories with mix of life, growth, game like design and some mix of action
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] The triple S talent in the title kinda means SSS-rank talent, not three S-rank talent.. This novel has an awesome synopsis.. I got so attracted and had a high hope for this novel when I read the synopsis, but after reading the story myself, I can only describe this novel with one word, Dissapointment.. It not as amazing as you read in the synopsis.. Basically, everyone on Earth has been teleported to another realm called Divine Sky Realm.. Luckily, the family members are not separated and are sent on the same island.. MC got teleport with his sister on the same island since they no longer have their parents.. So, let put this novel in short.. 👉🏻Everyone have a system? Check✔️. 👉🏻MC has SSS-rank talent called Infinite Duplicate? Check✔️. 👉🏻Can duplicates any skills? Beep❌️. 👉🏻Can duplicates any classes? Beep❌️. 👉🏻Can duplicates any talent? Beep❌️. 👉🏻Can ONLY duplicate items? Check✔️. 👉🏻Can duplicates 1,000 items on 1st version once per hour? Check✔️. 👉🏻Can duplicates 10,000 items on 2nd version once per hour? Check ✔️. 👉🏻Join the event to defend their own island for 7 days from monster invasion? Check✔️ 👉🏻MC is within top 3 in the event? Beep❌️ 👉🏻MC is within top 10 in the event? Beep❌️ 👉🏻MC is within top 20 in the event? Beep❌️ 👉🏻MC is rank 26 in the competition? Check✔️ 👉🏻Even after getting thousands and thousands of items such as, more than 50,000+ treasure chests, weapons, armors, potions, buildings, defence or attack towers, and countless monster subordinate within 3 day after enter the Divine Sky realm, MC still loses in competition against other earth players? Check✔️. 👉🏻The first rank is only has S-rank talent? Check✔️ 👉🏻Because of his duplicate talent, MC is becoming more like mercenaries king instead of strong MC? Check✔️ 👉🏻Overwhelming Powerful MC? Beep❌️ 👉🏻Overgeared MC? Check✔️ 👉🏻MC creating World Market Alliance to rule the market? Beep❌️ 👉🏻MC creating the World Market Alliance to help earthling growth? Check✔️ 👉🏻Ruthless and Merciless MC?? Beep❌️ 👉🏻Righteous MC? Check✔️. 👉🏻Gullible MC? Check✔️ 👉🏻Easily trust others? Check✔️ 👉🏻All of the Alliance members is someone MC knows? Beep❌️ 👉🏻 MC didn't know anyone within the alliance at all? Check✔️ 👉🏻Announcing his island location in the chat openly?? Check✔️ 👉🏻Willingly letting anyone teleport into his island to live there without any security or guard? Check✔️ 👉🏻Basically, the enemy who hate MC or Alliance can teleport and destroy MC island by simply planting the bombs in various places after teleport? Check✔️ 👉🏻Hidden power? Beep❌️ 👉🏻Let his sister know all his secrets?? Check✔️ There you go,the short summary of this novel.. In the world of superpower OR the world of cultivation, the ruthless and merciless MC is a must because the enemy is merciless too.. They will always try to kill MC without a reason and always plan revenge if not successful on the 1st try.. Plus, I can't imagine how other earthlings defeat MC superb strong island and his cheat talent.. If you read MC items and his island defence, it was ridiculously strong for an island to grow to that extent with 3 days staying at Divine Sky Realm.. But seeing MC got rank 26 in the events EVEN with his super cheat and OP talent, I know that the author will NEVER give the reader a satisfy win on MC.. The author reason for MC being weak and not performing well in that events is that MC talent is a long-term superpower where it needs times to become OP.. A power that can duplicate 10,000 items is a power that can grow fastest and not a long-term superpower that needs times to grow.. Oh well, maybe some people love this type of story.. So, good luck..
I feel like this could be a good story but once again Chatgpt or another AI took a large part in writing this. The vocabulary and the way the scenes are described just feels unnatural and too deep for a fantasy novel. Maybe if you used a bit less AI and more of your own writing skills this could be better
I love MTL, from my understanding so far the MC is a woman who thinks she’s a man, and her sister is actually a boy. And unless the translator can edit it to say otherwise then there’s nothing anyone can say to make me believe that’s not the case…
haven't read it yet I just wanna ask if there is any romance [img=strong][img=strong]
Yazdığın kitap gerçekten çok güzel. Okuması eğlenceli ve su gibi akıyor. Umarım bu kitabı bırakmaz ve yazmaya devam edersin :) Bu yazıyı kitaplığıma ekledim bile. Şimdiden emeklerin ve yeni bölümler için teşekkürler. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hello, Secret_Ethereal here, A supportive readers and a fellow author. Please keep your hard work. I'm a good judge of book and I could see your book has a potential in the future. Cheer up and don't lose your interest in writing just because you still not find the right person to appreciate your masterpiece. I'm rooting for a new chapter.
sudah menulis selama seminggu, cukup mudah dan santai. translate yang sulit (•‿•)
if this novel was put through some serious editing it would be great it's great story concept but in English anyway it just doesn't flow properly.
I read the first 130 chapters. But I have to give up. The premise was great. The first 20 chapters was good. But then it went more slice of life style and in one case took 12 chapters to advance 3 hours in the book. When I found my self scrolling through the chapter hoping for an interesting bit I realized there was other stories I could be reading. This story is great if you like slice of life and knowing what the side characters are doing day to day. But I came for the duplicating system.
Author have a Rough gem right here, If they can keep it up, It's can become a great peaceful read.
only read to chapter 21 story is good but needs to rework some of the sentences probably a translation problem plus the constant time skip then i feel like at many of the intro to a chapter or the ending is AI generated unsure if true just a feeling
I don't know about future but author really reads most of the comments and replies till now, and I have tried it with multiple accounts.... if u have any problem just a comment and see if can get a reply
An interesting work which is quite a bit different from the other novels involving a system. It's a bit refreshing to see an MC who's not looking to dominate the rankings or the market. Overall a good read and definitely worth a try.
So far the story is interesting, different from other stories which focus more on power domination (I mean he is OP but he uses his cheats with different actions). The beginning of the storyline is also unpredictable. Like he is indeed OP but not all wishes can be achieved because he has cheats, that's one of the experiences of MC's growth. The story leads to building an empire so it requires a lot of human resources. Just a little criticism when the MC is too trusting of others or how he thinks about it towards new people. And fortunately these people are not selfish and play tricks behind the scenes. Maybe explain more clearly what his thoughts are. I was confused as to why the MC didn't use his cheat to negotiate with important people in other realms and maximize profits, but if you logic it carefully there is a high risk because in this story the MC only has one life and is at risk of being colonized by other realms in the future (remember humans only new visitors compared to other realms that are already strong). Oh yes, there are several other things that bother me, such as the event system which is not really shown and I think the prizes from the epic box are too small because in the story it is explained that even nascent souls fight for it. Thanks for the story. Opening of new views.
overall the author did good just nitpicking here since he was poor you should understand that he would not limit himself to his past the food he treats as his favorites should not be limited to the Indonesian food like this mindset : when poor I can limit my spending at restaurants like KFC and McDonald i would not buy much unless it's a special day but what if i have more than enough money then nationality can be left behind. from sushi and other seafood to the signature food of other countries just the ability to be able to eat them would bring spiritual satisfaction now think with the convergence of cultures and hectic work he had to do to support his sister just the exploration of the different culinary masterpieces would be a relaxing and fun thing that would go beyond just nationality. and patriot acts a limited to those the government has helped and had a positive impact on not the poor even if they hit middle income they had no parents to influence their decision so the growth even when helping others include ensuring family safety and mental health
I just like these types of stories with mix of life, growth, game like design and some mix of action
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] The triple S talent in the title kinda means SSS-rank talent, not three S-rank talent.. This novel has an awesome synopsis.. I got so attracted and had a high hope for this novel when I read the synopsis, but after reading the story myself, I can only describe this novel with one word, Dissapointment.. It not as amazing as you read in the synopsis.. Basically, everyone on Earth has been teleported to another realm called Divine Sky Realm.. Luckily, the family members are not separated and are sent on the same island.. MC got teleport with his sister on the same island since they no longer have their parents.. So, let put this novel in short.. 👉🏻Everyone have a system? Check✔️. 👉🏻MC has SSS-rank talent called Infinite Duplicate? Check✔️. 👉🏻Can duplicates any skills? Beep❌️. 👉🏻Can duplicates any classes? Beep❌️. 👉🏻Can duplicates any talent? Beep❌️. 👉🏻Can ONLY duplicate items? Check✔️. 👉🏻Can duplicates 1,000 items on 1st version once per hour? Check✔️. 👉🏻Can duplicates 10,000 items on 2nd version once per hour? Check ✔️. 👉🏻Join the event to defend their own island for 7 days from monster invasion? Check✔️ 👉🏻MC is within top 3 in the event? Beep❌️ 👉🏻MC is within top 10 in the event? Beep❌️ 👉🏻MC is within top 20 in the event? Beep❌️ 👉🏻MC is rank 26 in the competition? Check✔️ 👉🏻Even after getting thousands and thousands of items such as, more than 50,000+ treasure chests, weapons, armors, potions, buildings, defence or attack towers, and countless monster subordinate within 3 day after enter the Divine Sky realm, MC still loses in competition against other earth players? Check✔️. 👉🏻The first rank is only has S-rank talent? Check✔️ 👉🏻Because of his duplicate talent, MC is becoming more like mercenaries king instead of strong MC? Check✔️ 👉🏻Overwhelming Powerful MC? Beep❌️ 👉🏻Overgeared MC? Check✔️ 👉🏻MC creating World Market Alliance to rule the market? Beep❌️ 👉🏻MC creating the World Market Alliance to help earthling growth? Check✔️ 👉🏻Ruthless and Merciless MC?? Beep❌️ 👉🏻Righteous MC? Check✔️. 👉🏻Gullible MC? Check✔️ 👉🏻Easily trust others? Check✔️ 👉🏻All of the Alliance members is someone MC knows? Beep❌️ 👉🏻 MC didn't know anyone within the alliance at all? Check✔️ 👉🏻Announcing his island location in the chat openly?? Check✔️ 👉🏻Willingly letting anyone teleport into his island to live there without any security or guard? Check✔️ 👉🏻Basically, the enemy who hate MC or Alliance can teleport and destroy MC island by simply planting the bombs in various places after teleport? Check✔️ 👉🏻Hidden power? Beep❌️ 👉🏻Let his sister know all his secrets?? Check✔️ There you go,the short summary of this novel.. In the world of superpower OR the world of cultivation, the ruthless and merciless MC is a must because the enemy is merciless too.. They will always try to kill MC without a reason and always plan revenge if not successful on the 1st try.. Plus, I can't imagine how other earthlings defeat MC superb strong island and his cheat talent.. If you read MC items and his island defence, it was ridiculously strong for an island to grow to that extent with 3 days staying at Divine Sky Realm.. But seeing MC got rank 26 in the events EVEN with his super cheat and OP talent, I know that the author will NEVER give the reader a satisfy win on MC.. The author reason for MC being weak and not performing well in that events is that MC talent is a long-term superpower where it needs times to become OP.. A power that can duplicate 10,000 items is a power that can grow fastest and not a long-term superpower that needs times to grow.. Oh well, maybe some people love this type of story.. So, good luck..
I feel like this could be a good story but once again Chatgpt or another AI took a large part in writing this. The vocabulary and the way the scenes are described just feels unnatural and too deep for a fantasy novel. Maybe if you used a bit less AI and more of your own writing skills this could be better
I love MTL, from my understanding so far the MC is a woman who thinks she’s a man, and her sister is actually a boy. And unless the translator can edit it to say otherwise then there’s nothing anyone can say to make me believe that’s not the case…
haven't read it yet I just wanna ask if there is any romance [img=strong][img=strong]
Yazdığın kitap gerçekten çok güzel. Okuması eğlenceli ve su gibi akıyor. Umarım bu kitabı bırakmaz ve yazmaya devam edersin :) Bu yazıyı kitaplığıma ekledim bile. Şimdiden emeklerin ve yeni bölümler için teşekkürler. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hello, Secret_Ethereal here, A supportive readers and a fellow author. Please keep your hard work. I'm a good judge of book and I could see your book has a potential in the future. Cheer up and don't lose your interest in writing just because you still not find the right person to appreciate your masterpiece. I'm rooting for a new chapter.
sudah menulis selama seminggu, cukup mudah dan santai. translate yang sulit (•‿•)
if this novel was put through some serious editing it would be great it's great story concept but in English anyway it just doesn't flow properly.