systemwriterK

systemwriterK

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French writer that just started, i write in english because is simpler for me and i am more used to it than my original tongue. i see you reading!!

2023-05-12 Joint Global
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systemwriterK
systemwriterK
40 minutes ago
Posted

good work ! that would be good to know about the different force, where he lives ( capital or low end city) how useful can items be in the world. the lvl of the highest group. and something i don't understand like can others only take off the fruit from the game ? or make specifications of what else they can take off. it feels blurry to me. Also will he be a lone player or get into a guild etc. Anyway good read wish to see more

systemwriterK
systemwriterK
systemwriterK
25 days ago
Replied to Objectively_Wrong

are yousure it s translated ? xD can t find it

systemwriterK
systemwriterK
25 days ago
Posted

i hate people ranting on and on undecided trash mc so fuking annoying ! XD and this guy landon so fuking annoying do people really talk like that xD fuck me at 4 am reading just fuck my mind. 20 at least so he could his basic abilities and result 0 extravagance no cheat at all. so sad i put 5 stars because writing it might be hard using your imaginations with one guy lazy and another guys annoying well everyone got their own imaginations. i pity you i don't know what life you ve lived. might have been hard.

systemwriterK
systemwriterK
1 months ago
Posted

i wish you could write another story it s really good, so tired of trash novels please make one more xD

systemwriterK
systemwriterK
1 months ago
Replied to Shadow_Gamer1

invincible since everything he mutated is unparalleled so invincible (unique) weak to strong since he just started and even then he got a (invincible ) unique skill meteor that no one can have and makes him invincible among other newbies, so kind of invincible at this level from weak to strong

systemwriterK
systemwriterK
1 months ago
Posted

mehhh wtf is this make it simple and explain the basics, what scrren what mouse ? are we dogs ? bro the guy talks for two hours after his first battle, a little bit irrationnal. when evolve it goes from 1 to 3 ?? fuck best math in the world, and a system like chinese novel that is hiding and open new functions when author wants, i guess i right? i mean is there a story ? fuck it 's so hard to find a story that is not trash here, can t you fucking understand that no one wants to read no story only upgrade this and that ? at least make it fun or funny, so serious when it's like this. bro fuck i m done. give you 4 star to affect ur rating but really disappointed i would put minus 10 if i could.

systemwriterK
systemwriterK
1 months ago
Posted

how did you you transform 200 chap into 350 chap a genius ahah

systemwriterK
systemwriterK
1 months ago
Posted

i laughed the entire time, more funny than anything else it changes from usual novel 'meat stick' ahaha xD

systemwriterK
systemwriterK
1 months ago
Replied to systemwriterK

but i would suggest making a manhwa maybe at least to see the cards or effect, cause in a novel it s really to imagine all these things just by names or description

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