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Rabbit Escape Solos The Verse. RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH BUMGUMIIIIIIIIIIIII DOMAIN EXPANSION - CONSTANT L'S A THOUSAND MAHORAGA SUMMON ATTEMPTS RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
Not your run of the mill JJK fanfic. Helios does an excellent job at creating obstacles to temper the MC and has a good understanding of the JJK verse, allowing for a very enjoyable read.
Another JJK fic that has been completed. It is expected since JJK is quite short. Thanks for this peak potential man. Best innovation of his technique I've read, I'm sure it'll continue to be an inspiration to future Megumi evolution, MC or sidecharacter. 👤 Thanks for the great book 👤
The best fanfic to come out of this app. Which is surprising for someone so affected by brainrot. Secretly a crack fic but we don’t talk about that. Not only is everything set and thought out the writing style is good. Blend of humor and when necessary seriousness. When asked if his novel would be trash, Helios said “Nad I’d write peak.”
all I can really say is, my guy cooked and when I say he cooked he cooked hard. Although, sum parts can be ify, you will mostly miss them as you will be reading peak.
Just to make it 100 reviews ✌️...............................................................................................................................................................................................
This is another peak fiction, the apex of Webnovel since the previous golden age...But brain rot aside, Helios cooked here fr. The way the plot developed, the character development Megumi went through on his way to the apex, and even the way the world reacted to his presence was perfectly depicted. The start was a bit rough but it was like a diamond buried in dirt. My only complaint would be that the grammar is a bit lacking, but it's nothing either proofreading or Grammarly can't fix. Thank you Helios for helping this bum beat the allegations lol
this is the worst Fic ever, why would you even write it smh (it's not helios just dared me)
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this is about as good as megumi as a character cam become. he wasn't Op from the start, he didn't stay too weak and just use gojo as a shield and he is the greatest potential man i have seen yet. you are not a writer Helios, you are an artist and what you made here is a masterpiece.
This is just JJK with a bit more powerful megumi, and it's annoying as hell. In the beginning, you don't realise it since the canon hadn't started at that point. But from the very beginning of canon he starts to act like he has amnesia. Forgetting vital knowledge 😕 and giving stupid excuses to not change the canon bro just say you don't want the canon to change 😒 you say i want to do that and prevent this yet all you. Do is make super forced plot where the plot is just not charged. Writing quality is great but you have to admit this sad fact that, author of this novel has very mediocre creativity and imagination. (Sorry btw) Also most annoying characters are when the MC just wastes his curse energy (even though yuta was doing just fine) and letting geto escape. And we also saw him saw "I won't let it happen again" when his sis got cursed 😒 and then proceeds change nothing in the chapter called "vessel" it was sooooo forced...... Ahhh 😫 it's painful to read ( you can turn your brain off and it'll not bother you).
Spoiler de révélation
This man is an absolute fraud, not only did he make Bumgumi strong, but he also gave Bumta happy ending, giving his loli wife a human form. That is what I call absolute fraudelence, how dare he glaze Bumta of all mfs, couldn't be more disappointed. Garbage fic.
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Okay, I want to be serious here. This is a story that I have enjoyed from beginning to end the writing quality has improved massively over time.The story was peak. That's all that can be said. Thank you for this amazing experience. And I hope whoever sees this review will feel the same way. When they read this story.
There's not really much to say. It's shorter than other fics but , it's an absolute masterpiece. If you guys don't like this, then your brain's probably digged out by Kenjaku
Phenomenal story that takes Bumgumi to an actually well written character, fights are crazy hype and the references make it just so much better
I'm here for my third and final review... Now that it's over I can finally say. This was Truly Our (Peak) Jujutsu Kaisen!
Damn what a ride man I love this I’ve been here since day one and it’s been one hell of a ride I’m going to miss this you know but I hope other people will find this and in joy it to keep the memory alive Danm I miss it already
It has been an amazing journey full of ups and downs. I am happy to have the honour of encountering this fic in this life. Megumi's growth and various other surprises kept me awake to read this even more. Gojo evolving beyond his original level, Sukuna becoming a singer, Megumi becoming a God, Shoko becoming nigh godly at RCT, Nobara having a DE, and all the other surprises with the childish antics of the characters made this truly fun. I wish you a good rest. Free your mind from this one. And in the future please come back with a fic of another story. This one is the most peak fic JJK is gonna get. I am not ever going to search for another JJK fic. This will be my last. Stay safe. Please write more 😊😊😊
I'm sad now that it's over, but it was a wild ride. megumi has officially reached unc status, and with all these elden ring references, I hope you make an elden ring fanfic at some point 🙏🙏
If you're a guy, you just became my besto friendo. If you're a girl I'll marry. Seriously love the story, been following since day 1. Thanks a lot. Looking forward to more fanfictions from you
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All I'm gonna say is that it's better than Nah I'd Adapt and is an ABSOLUTE CINEMA!!!!!
BUMGUMI RAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! POTENTIAL MAN! TRAITOR MAN! THE TRUE VILLAIN OF JJK! GO BACK TO CONSERVATIVE LY WHITE SPLASHING ON YOUR TSUMIKI HAIR DOLL INSTEAD FRAUDGUMI!!!!
Rabbit Escape Solos The Verse. RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH BUMGUMIIIIIIIIIIIII DOMAIN EXPANSION - CONSTANT L'S A THOUSAND MAHORAGA SUMMON ATTEMPTS RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
Not your run of the mill JJK fanfic. Helios does an excellent job at creating obstacles to temper the MC and has a good understanding of the JJK verse, allowing for a very enjoyable read.
Another JJK fic that has been completed. It is expected since JJK is quite short. Thanks for this peak potential man. Best innovation of his technique I've read, I'm sure it'll continue to be an inspiration to future Megumi evolution, MC or sidecharacter. 👤 Thanks for the great book 👤
The best fanfic to come out of this app. Which is surprising for someone so affected by brainrot. Secretly a crack fic but we don’t talk about that. Not only is everything set and thought out the writing style is good. Blend of humor and when necessary seriousness. When asked if his novel would be trash, Helios said “Nad I’d write peak.”
all I can really say is, my guy cooked and when I say he cooked he cooked hard. Although, sum parts can be ify, you will mostly miss them as you will be reading peak.
Just to make it 100 reviews ✌️...............................................................................................................................................................................................
This is another peak fiction, the apex of Webnovel since the previous golden age...But brain rot aside, Helios cooked here fr. The way the plot developed, the character development Megumi went through on his way to the apex, and even the way the world reacted to his presence was perfectly depicted. The start was a bit rough but it was like a diamond buried in dirt. My only complaint would be that the grammar is a bit lacking, but it's nothing either proofreading or Grammarly can't fix. Thank you Helios for helping this bum beat the allegations lol
this is the worst Fic ever, why would you even write it smh (it's not helios just dared me)
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this is about as good as megumi as a character cam become. he wasn't Op from the start, he didn't stay too weak and just use gojo as a shield and he is the greatest potential man i have seen yet. you are not a writer Helios, you are an artist and what you made here is a masterpiece.
This is just JJK with a bit more powerful megumi, and it's annoying as hell. In the beginning, you don't realise it since the canon hadn't started at that point. But from the very beginning of canon he starts to act like he has amnesia. Forgetting vital knowledge 😕 and giving stupid excuses to not change the canon bro just say you don't want the canon to change 😒 you say i want to do that and prevent this yet all you. Do is make super forced plot where the plot is just not charged. Writing quality is great but you have to admit this sad fact that, author of this novel has very mediocre creativity and imagination. (Sorry btw) Also most annoying characters are when the MC just wastes his curse energy (even though yuta was doing just fine) and letting geto escape. And we also saw him saw "I won't let it happen again" when his sis got cursed 😒 and then proceeds change nothing in the chapter called "vessel" it was sooooo forced...... Ahhh 😫 it's painful to read ( you can turn your brain off and it'll not bother you).
Spoiler de révélation This man is an absolute fraud, not only did he make Bumgumi strong, but he also gave Bumta happy ending, giving his loli wife a human form. That is what I call absolute fraudelence, how dare he glaze Bumta of all mfs, couldn't be more disappointed. Garbage fic.
Spoiler de révélation Okay, I want to be serious here. This is a story that I have enjoyed from beginning to end the writing quality has improved massively over time.The story was peak. That's all that can be said. Thank you for this amazing experience. And I hope whoever sees this review will feel the same way. When they read this story.
There's not really much to say. It's shorter than other fics but , it's an absolute masterpiece. If you guys don't like this, then your brain's probably digged out by Kenjaku
Phenomenal story that takes Bumgumi to an actually well written character, fights are crazy hype and the references make it just so much better
I'm here for my third and final review... Now that it's over I can finally say. This was Truly Our (Peak) Jujutsu Kaisen!
Damn what a ride man I love this I’ve been here since day one and it’s been one hell of a ride I’m going to miss this you know but I hope other people will find this and in joy it to keep the memory alive Danm I miss it already
It has been an amazing journey full of ups and downs. I am happy to have the honour of encountering this fic in this life. Megumi's growth and various other surprises kept me awake to read this even more. Gojo evolving beyond his original level, Sukuna becoming a singer, Megumi becoming a God, Shoko becoming nigh godly at RCT, Nobara having a DE, and all the other surprises with the childish antics of the characters made this truly fun. I wish you a good rest. Free your mind from this one. And in the future please come back with a fic of another story. This one is the most peak fic JJK is gonna get. I am not ever going to search for another JJK fic. This will be my last. Stay safe. Please write more 😊😊😊
I'm sad now that it's over, but it was a wild ride. megumi has officially reached unc status, and with all these elden ring references, I hope you make an elden ring fanfic at some point 🙏🙏
If you're a guy, you just became my besto friendo. If you're a girl I'll marry. Seriously love the story, been following since day 1. Thanks a lot. Looking forward to more fanfictions from you
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All I'm gonna say is that it's better than Nah I'd Adapt and is an ABSOLUTE CINEMA!!!!!
BUMGUMI RAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! POTENTIAL MAN! TRAITOR MAN! THE TRUE VILLAIN OF JJK! GO BACK TO CONSERVATIVE LY WHITE SPLASHING ON YOUR TSUMIKI HAIR DOLL INSTEAD FRAUDGUMI!!!!