Dylan_Perkins

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Dylan_Perkins
Dylan_Perkins
2 months ago
Posted

Okay, I want to be serious here. This is a story that I have enjoyed from beginning to end the writing quality has improved massively over time.The story was peak. That's all that can be said. Thank you for this amazing experience. And I hope whoever sees this review will feel the same way. When they read this story.

Dylan_Perkins
Dylan_Perkins
2 months ago
Commented

+1

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Dylan_Perkins
3 months ago
Replied to A_Real_Werewolf234

Hey, if it takes you a few days to cook up something really good. Take your time.

All the while, planes and trains housing some of the stronger Devils captured by America were being transported to the city. Sukuna was right that Dallas was going to be cut off and used as a battle ground.

The King Of Curses(Chainsaw Man)

The King Of Curses(Chainsaw Man)

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

Dylan_Perkins
Dylan_Perkins
3 months ago
Commented

Does that debuff stay there for the long time or is it something he can break through? Like can he use the frenzied flame to burn that away? Could he learn ghost flame.

Dylan_Perkins
Dylan_Perkins
3 months ago
Commented

Is it only humanoid creatures like Lizard men or humans and elves that he can turn into mummys. Or can anything be called a mummy?

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Dylan_Perkins
Dylan_Perkins
3 months ago
Commented

The way that battle went was actually pretty good. I just wish it went on for longer. Keep up the good work, man.👍

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Dylan_Perkins
Dylan_Perkins
3 months ago
Replied to A_Real_Werewolf234

He would be a pretty good pick. It just depends if you want to focus on technology or straight brawling or possibly delve into magic like Magnus.

Dylan_Perkins
Dylan_Perkins
3 months ago
Replied to A_Real_Werewolf234

That sounds amazing. Please do that. It's gonna be very hard to figure out which type of primary you want, though. I'm not sure. Which one will be the best for it though. It will be a fun experience to read through.😁

Dylan_Perkins
Dylan_Perkins
4 months ago
Commented

I say leave it how it is. Use this as a learning point to make your story better as you go on. I find this story very entertaining. Don't work too hard and burn yourself out on it. Trying to rewrite stuff.

(A/N: Given that I had missed the mark with the previous chapter, I have two options for you guys. The first of which is to go back and re-write it properly, while the second option is to leave it and just continue with the fanfiction. Depending on the overall answer I might partially re-write this chapter as well.)

MHA: Jigsaw Reborn

MHA: Jigsaw Reborn

Anime & Comics · Delusion10

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